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I can’t tell you the truth, that I’ve cheated on you.
The first time was an accident, a drunken affair,
I know that it’s not right, and definitely not fair.

I can’t help myself now; I’m like a dog in heat,
It’s too easy for women, to induce me to cheat.
I should say no, be firm, and stay true,
But my will is weak, I end up betraying you.

If you found out, it would shatter your heart,
Destroy what we’ve built, and tear us apart.
I know what I risk, when I act in this way,
In the end I’ll get caught, it’ll happen one day.

It’s a matter of time, till you discover what I’ve done,
You’ll ask me how many, I’ll tell you just one.
I’ll have to answer for the pain, and lack of respect,
But for now only hell knows, heaven suspects.
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Hell Knows, Heaven Suspects

Contributed by angelus8663 on Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 07:55:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You Don’t know what I’ve done, or what I still do,
I can’t tell you the truth, that I’ve cheated on you.
The first time was an accident, a drunken affair,
I know that it’s not right, and definitely not fair.

I can’t help myself now; I’m like a dog in heat,
It’s too easy for women, to induce me to cheat.
I should say no, be firm, and stay true,
But my will is weak, I end up betraying you.

If you found out, it would shatter your heart,
Destroy what we’ve built, and tear us apart.
I know what I risk, when I act in this way,
In the end I’ll get caught, it’ll happen one day.

It’s a matter of time, till you discover what I’ve done,
You’ll ask me how many, I’ll tell you just one.
I’ll have to answer for the pain, and lack of respect,
But for now only hell knows, heaven suspects.




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Re: Hell Knows, Heaven Suspects (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 09:51:07 AM AEST
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Beautiful, eloquent mastery of thought.

wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Hell Knows, Heaven Suspects (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 04:08:24 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this..thanks for the smile.
JenniK


Re: Hell Knows, Heaven Suspects (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 05:02:20 PM AEST
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I personally believe Heaven Knows, and
those in Hell couldn't care less and would not
be able to hear over the torturous screams
of others. Smiles! But your poetic storytelling
here is excellent! I enjoyed this!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob)


Re: Hell Knows, Heaven Suspects (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 10:31:28 AM AEST
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Incredible writing.
Blessings,
emy




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