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Array ( [sid] => 16986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => drink [time] => 2003-05-04 05:05:00 [hometext] => i have never known anyone with a current alcohal problem... but i was at school sitting in frount of a sadd poster doing nothing and well this is what came out... [bodytext] => last night you went out again,
drunk a few with the men.
with every sip you slip further away,
so promise me you wont drink today.
only 1440 minutes more,
if you drink again im out the door.
you kill me and you kill yourself,
so for once think of yopur health.
i'm not joking, the bottle or me
just dont drink again, you will be sorry.
i know you can do it, just try,
thats what i should have said yesterday *sigh*
but its too late your already dead,
last night you never came to bed.
all i got was a phone call about you,
you werent just drunk, you drove too.
took a 16 year old aswell,
for that u justly burn in hell.

why didn't i stop you?
why did i let you drink?
could have told you not to,
could have told you to think. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 25 [informant] => hardcoreputa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

drink

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

last night you went out again,
drunk a few with the men.
with every sip you slip further away,
so promise me you wont drink today.
only 1440 minutes more,
if you drink again im out the door.
you kill me and you kill yourself,
so for once think of yopur health.
i'm not joking, the bottle or me
just dont drink again, you will be sorry.
i know you can do it, just try,
thats what i should have said yesterday *sigh*
but its too late your already dead,
last night you never came to bed.
all i got was a phone call about you,
you werent just drunk, you drove too.
took a 16 year old aswell,
for that u justly burn in hell.

why didn't i stop you?
why did i let you drink?
could have told you not to,
could have told you to think.

Copyright © hardcoreputa ... [ 2003-05-04 05:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: drink (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 06:41:52 AM AEST
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your poem is very good, except my father was an alcoholic,,you can tell them all you want make threats but if they do not want to stop no one can stop them.

Shari

Re: drink (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 01:08:24 AM AEST
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You did a good job on this poem. I must agree with Shari, my father is also an alcoholic and threats do no good. They do as they do nomatter what.
Michelle

Re: drink (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 12:10:56 AM AEST
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beautifully written. i wouldn't describe myself as an alcoholic(but no one does) but i did have a drinking problem, sorta. on behalf of drunks everywhere, it's not an easy habit to break. it's almost as hard as smoking. but i did stop, and now i rarely drink, and never very much. but i digress, a very touching write to have been inspired by a poster.

Cancer
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