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Array ( [sid] => 169850 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pneumonia Blue [time] => 2012-01-02 01:49:59 [hometext] => Three pack camel on the back, flat on the hospital bed. The Medicine Man said ‘quit or die’ - I quit [bodytext] => Pneumonia Blue

The thermometers have left
on quiet feet
this room of sheets

A visitor came down the tubes
to chat of this and that;
of everyday:

He raised his hand as if to say
a word or two

I coughed
and he was blue
pneumonia blue

I saw he had come to see
if I was ready for eternity

(1988)
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Pneumonia Blue

Contributed by richard2 on Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 01:49:59 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Pneumonia Blue

The thermometers have left
on quiet feet
this room of sheets

A visitor came down the tubes
to chat of this and that;
of everyday:

He raised his hand as if to say
a word or two

I coughed
and he was blue
pneumonia blue

I saw he had come to see
if I was ready for eternity

(1988)

Copyright Â© richard2 ... [ 2012-01-02 01:49:59]
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Re: Pneumonia Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by candidate on Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 04:22:38 AM AEST
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Well done I enjoyed reading your poem

Re: Pneumonia Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel_L_Bamberg on Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 08:10:36 AM AEST
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An alarming read. I am glad you made the choice to quit. I hope my efforts will one day pay off as well. I've tried to quit several times and each time is better than the last but I am still smoking.

Good Job!

DLB

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