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Array ( [sid] => 169788 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Know the Girl I知 Talking About? [time] => 2011-12-30 21:04:51 [hometext] => This is my first poem submitted. I wrote this about the love of my life and what I felt like I went through to find her. [bodytext] => You know the girl I知 talking about?

The one that laughs in the sun and plays in the rain
Never saddened and shuns pain
Looks at the world through the purest of eyes
Not ever do I want to see her cry
You know the one?

She is never far but just out of sight
To catch a glimpse would make my night
Day after day I search with care
Never to find her to my despair
Have you seen her?

I swear she exists, I know it to be true
But all I have are a handful of clues
Perhaps it is my fault, staying to the light
By chance I look to the night
Could she be there?

Here she dwells! Amongst the moon and the stars
Not far from where you are
Just look to the night sky and you値l see her face
Shining bright and full of grace
Do my eyes deceive me?

No! I致e found the one, this elusive girl
The one that makes my heart pound and head swirl
The one that is always in my dreams
My obsession, it seems

You know the one I知 talking about
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You Know the Girl I知 Talking About?

Contributed by malinsinbigler on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 09:04:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You know the girl I知 talking about?

The one that laughs in the sun and plays in the rain
Never saddened and shuns pain
Looks at the world through the purest of eyes
Not ever do I want to see her cry
You know the one?

She is never far but just out of sight
To catch a glimpse would make my night
Day after day I search with care
Never to find her to my despair
Have you seen her?

I swear she exists, I know it to be true
But all I have are a handful of clues
Perhaps it is my fault, staying to the light
By chance I look to the night
Could she be there?

Here she dwells! Amongst the moon and the stars
Not far from where you are
Just look to the night sky and you値l see her face
Shining bright and full of grace
Do my eyes deceive me?

No! I致e found the one, this elusive girl
The one that makes my heart pound and head swirl
The one that is always in my dreams
My obsession, it seems

You know the one I知 talking about




Copyright ツゥ malinsinbigler ... [ 2011-12-30 21:04:51]
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Re: You Know the Girl I知 Talking About? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 07:42:53 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Well this is a beautiful write.
Blessings, Happy New Year,
emy


Re: You Know the Girl I知 Talking About? (User Rating: 1 )
by velvet_rose94 on Thursday, 25th October 2012 @ 01:13:50 PM AEST
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I had to read this aloud to get the right impact in the certain pacing you put into it. Its really sweet and the repetition of you know the girl I'm talking about with variations was clever.




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