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I live where you live-
Where you rest-
Where you play.

I have heard
Every word
That you whispered today.

Every thought in your
Tweaky small head
I have spied.

A witness to every
Truth broken
And lied.

I have seen every
Wonder you've
Managed to see.

There isn't a secret
Too secret
For me.

Copyright © 2011 Richard D. Remler [comments] => 6 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 25 [informant] => nightowl61 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Shadows

Contributed by nightowl61 on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 05:08:08 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

..............................
I live where you live-
Where you rest-
Where you play.

I have heard
Every word
That you whispered today.

Every thought in your
Tweaky small head
I have spied.

A witness to every
Truth broken
And lied.

I have seen every
Wonder you've
Managed to see.

There isn't a secret
Too secret
For me.

Copyright © 2011 Richard D. Remler

Copyright Â© nightowl61 ... [ 2011-12-29 17:08:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by crmnlilbruno on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 05:47:44 PM AEST
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Short and to the point and also quite unique.
I like it

Re: Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel_L_Bamberg on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 05:48:16 PM AEST
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Very interesting. I think you should have placed this in Ambiguous Poetry because there are so many open ended interpretations one can generate from this powerful work. It struck me as self reflective but could just as easily be of God or of our similarities among mankind as a kind. Those are only a few potential ideas which come from reading it for me. As I said it works better for me viewing it as self reflective. Either way you intended it, is not important just that you intended it at all, that's the beauty, the brilliance of this quick shot of poetic potency.

Really Well Done!

DLB

Re: Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 02:46:43 AM AEST
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Great flow,packed with meaning,can feel anger and something slightly sinister,edgy,very effective!

Re: Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 04:14:51 AM AEST
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You are speaking of your conscience.
Has to be. Class dismissed! LOL!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob)

Re: Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 08:45:31 PM AEST
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Loved the style of this and I agree it says alot and yet leaves the reader a bit to ponder. Depth I like it.

Michelle

Re: Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by illuminate_the_shadows on Tuesday, 10th January 2012 @ 01:25:44 PM AEST
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This was a joy to read. Insightful.

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