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Array ( [sid] => 169713 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mother Ocean [time] => 2011-12-28 09:35:17 [hometext] => This poem was written when I had an argument with my mother. I went to the beach to calm myself. It's basically one big metaphor. Looking forward to some feedback! [bodytext] => Unrivaled majestic beauty,
Pushing and pulling against the sand of time,
Immensity beyond the horizon,
That which no man can limit nor bind,

Sunlight glinting from your surface,
Regret awaits upon the shore,
Peaceful, raging oblivion,
Your gentle strife is your allure,

Relentless, unforgiving elegance,
Waves consuming all emotion,
Gentle caresses and chaotic blows,
Always rescinding false devotion,

Waves pounding, heart crashing,
Infinitely fluctuating yet hopelessly unchanged,
Flippantly dismissive,
Forever it shall remain. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 107 [topic] => 23 [informant] => bmw2692 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Mother Ocean

Contributed by bmw2692 on Wednesday, 28th December 2011 @ 09:35:17 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Unrivaled majestic beauty,
Pushing and pulling against the sand of time,
Immensity beyond the horizon,
That which no man can limit nor bind,

Sunlight glinting from your surface,
Regret awaits upon the shore,
Peaceful, raging oblivion,
Your gentle strife is your allure,

Relentless, unforgiving elegance,
Waves consuming all emotion,
Gentle caresses and chaotic blows,
Always rescinding false devotion,

Waves pounding, heart crashing,
Infinitely fluctuating yet hopelessly unchanged,
Flippantly dismissive,
Forever it shall remain.

Copyright © bmw2692 ... [ 2011-12-28 09:35:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Mother Ocean (User Rating: 1 )
by bmw2692 on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 05:03:22 PM AEST
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A little discouraged that I haven't gotten any feedback yet :(

Re: Mother Ocean (User Rating: 1 )
by bmw2692 on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 05:03:30 PM AEST
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A little discouraged that I haven't gotten any feedback yet :(

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