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Array ( [sid] => 169658 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without a Christmas tree [time] => 2011-12-26 09:31:12 [hometext] => i feel very inspired when it comes to topics relfecting on others struggles and lives. this is another one similar to the one i just did this time its about a broke mans view hope you guys like it [bodytext] => this is a poem i wrote
i hope you see
that some sleep in cold
while you walk around with a christmas coat
ships roll away yearly
and some just manage to stay upfloat
this ocean is big
all i want is one gift for my kid under a tree
it doesnt even have to be a christmas tree
just so for once my kid can look up at me and smile up at me


but no my light in my heart
for ever has been shatterd into pieces
still i think of the birth of baby jesus
his love rises me up
even though the moeny in pocket decreses

i wish i could give my kid something
when ever hes it at a store
i feel so low watching how everyone else
flies outa here into the atmosphere
while i push lower and lower
into the core
i feel like i have no choice but to rob a store

ships roll on there way
while some just hope that one day theill drift of to shore
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Without a Christmas tree

Contributed by lyricalpoet on Monday, 26th December 2011 @ 09:31:12 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



this is a poem i wrote
i hope you see
that some sleep in cold
while you walk around with a christmas coat
ships roll away yearly
and some just manage to stay upfloat
this ocean is big
all i want is one gift for my kid under a tree
it doesnt even have to be a christmas tree
just so for once my kid can look up at me and smile up at me


but no my light in my heart
for ever has been shatterd into pieces
still i think of the birth of baby jesus
his love rises me up
even though the moeny in pocket decreses

i wish i could give my kid something
when ever hes it at a store
i feel so low watching how everyone else
flies outa here into the atmosphere
while i push lower and lower
into the core
i feel like i have no choice but to rob a store

ships roll on there way
while some just hope that one day theill drift of to shore




Copyright © lyricalpoet ... [ 2011-12-26 09:31:12]
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