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[aid] => mick
[title] => Never Show You
[time] => 2011-12-24 20:31:42
[hometext] => So this is an old poem I wrote and ive always wanted to improve on the concept. I never took any poetry or advanced english classes so anything you can add would be awesome on things i could do
[bodytext] => Let the rain poor down another night of sorrow creeping on his heart. As the meta-emotion begins to give him conflicting fights. He concentrates and analyzes what brings him his light. Knowing what he can't have is what seems to be the only thing he holds on to. He tries to push it down hoping the feeling will not linger, everything rushes up as soon as he sees her. Having it so close to him and secretly it's not enough being in love, this kind of love, it's something if he shares he's afraid it will all be lost. Knowing that there is nothing here of lust, it's the truest love he ever found but seems he's had enough. Inevitable scars from dancing solo on that thin line he can't believe he did this to himself but he thinks of it too much of the time. The feeling should never of existed, because it will never be returned. at least not as love he has for her. He's just her best friend [comments] => 1 [counter] => 102 [topic] => 48 [informant] => berg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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