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Array ( [sid] => 169615 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unexplainable Dreams [time] => 2011-12-24 17:53:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am literally dieing on the inside,
Everyday a little more,
Without you.

In the past I have been known,
To dream some crazy dreams.
Some that have nothing to do with my life,
Or my intended future,

But lately...

Ever since meeting you,
I find you are all that i dream about.

I dream about your lips,
And I imagine what it would be like,
To kiss you.

I dream about your touch,
And I imagine what it would be like,
To lie next to you.

I dream about your voice,
And I imagine what it would be like,
To have you whisper the words "I love you" against my neck.

Almost always now these unexplainable dreams,
Seep into my waking hours,
Or become so life-like that,
I find myself waking up,
Thinking that you are lying next to me.

It puts a weight on my heart,
Almost heavier than I can bare,
When I roll over and realize,
That none of it is real,

And because of this...

I am literally dieing on the inside,
Everyday a little more,
Without you... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 58 [topic] => 2 [informant] => sidsid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Unexplainable Dreams

Contributed by sidsid on Saturday, 24th December 2011 @ 05:53:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I am literally dieing on the inside,
Everyday a little more,
Without you.

In the past I have been known,
To dream some crazy dreams.
Some that have nothing to do with my life,
Or my intended future,

But lately...

Ever since meeting you,
I find you are all that i dream about.

I dream about your lips,
And I imagine what it would be like,
To kiss you.

I dream about your touch,
And I imagine what it would be like,
To lie next to you.

I dream about your voice,
And I imagine what it would be like,
To have you whisper the words "I love you" against my neck.

Almost always now these unexplainable dreams,
Seep into my waking hours,
Or become so life-like that,
I find myself waking up,
Thinking that you are lying next to me.

It puts a weight on my heart,
Almost heavier than I can bare,
When I roll over and realize,
That none of it is real,

And because of this...

I am literally dieing on the inside,
Everyday a little more,
Without you...

Copyright © sidsid ... [ 2011-12-24 17:53:11]
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Re: Unexplainable Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by sidsid on Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 06:11:45 PM AEST
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Please comment on this. I really want to know if its any good. It's my first attempt at writing and I would like to know if I'm any good or if I should just stop.

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