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Array ( [sid] => 169612 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unseen Tears [time] => 2011-12-24 11:08:38 [hometext] => Gloom grows within me when I consider potential abandonment [bodytext] => Is it worse to witness evident sorrow than escape
Into a utopia where you will find solace
Where you will detach from my hurt and your
Empathetic pain that clouds your judgment
How I shudder in fear of a darker reality to come

You now plan to turn the page for your life's sake
Well so you think your fate depends on this action
I may wallow in unseen tears as you tour the beach
Discovering the hospitality lacking in this setting
Loving is letting go as the saying states
Perhaps I shall put this proverb into practice

Clear your thoughts and your heart let alone life
Of all these encumbrances that attach to the heart
I will remember you; perhaps you'll remember me
And picture my unseen tears observing your own [comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Deidra_Carmichael [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Unseen Tears

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 24th December 2011 @ 11:08:38 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Is it worse to witness evident sorrow than escape
Into a utopia where you will find solace
Where you will detach from my hurt and your
Empathetic pain that clouds your judgment
How I shudder in fear of a darker reality to come

You now plan to turn the page for your life's sake
Well so you think your fate depends on this action
I may wallow in unseen tears as you tour the beach
Discovering the hospitality lacking in this setting
Loving is letting go as the saying states
Perhaps I shall put this proverb into practice

Clear your thoughts and your heart let alone life
Of all these encumbrances that attach to the heart
I will remember you; perhaps you'll remember me
And picture my unseen tears observing your own

Copyright Â© Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2011-12-24 11:08:38]
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Re: Unseen Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Saturday, 24th December 2011 @ 12:48:01 PM AEST
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What a strong write, written with such emotion. The world seen thru your eyes, sadness, loss.

Re: Unseen Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Anara on Saturday, 24th December 2011 @ 01:12:55 PM AEST
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Just wow...enough said

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