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Array ( [sid] => 169544 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shades of Green [time] => 2011-12-22 07:12:12 [hometext] => This poem has been dialed down.. I curse alot but change the words for this site.. Let me know what u think.. Do you get the measage? [bodytext] => Shades of Green
____JG______
Sun up moon down
Moon up sun down
smile up frown down
Sit up Bow down
I thought the grass was greener so i hopped the fence
I landed on some **** slipped and saw 2 cents 
Mmm my grass WAS greener so i hopped the fence
A new day a new neighbor i takea peak hoping he doesnt take offense
Boy his grass is really green so i hopped the fence 
I picked up a blade it was neon green makin no sense
I walked around some more before i realized its plastic what a fake
Mmm my grass WAS greener what a mistake
So i hopped the fence home again 
Just then i notice another yard this ones a perfect ten
So i hopped the fence
And what i landed in was to intense
2 blood hungry beast waiting in suspense 
The grass was greener but to live i had to hop the fence
Hungry Beast stampeding towards me 
Heart racing mind pacing i gotta flee
I just wanna go back to my grass
Its to late the beast caught up and thats my ass
Lifeless being torn limb from limb i noticed his grass was blood red
Mmm my grass WAS greener to bad im dead...
.....
.....
.....
.....
"Rest in Pieces I hope it was worth a different shade of green" [comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Jeriku [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Shades of Green

Contributed by Jeriku on Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 07:12:12 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Shades of Green
____JG______
Sun up moon down
Moon up sun down
smile up frown down
Sit up Bow down
I thought the grass was greener so i hopped the fence
I landed on some **** slipped and saw 2 cents 
Mmm my grass WAS greener so i hopped the fence
A new day a new neighbor i takea peak hoping he doesnt take offense
Boy his grass is really green so i hopped the fence 
I picked up a blade it was neon green makin no sense
I walked around some more before i realized its plastic what a fake
Mmm my grass WAS greener what a mistake
So i hopped the fence home again 
Just then i notice another yard this ones a perfect ten
So i hopped the fence
And what i landed in was to intense
2 blood hungry beast waiting in suspense 
The grass was greener but to live i had to hop the fence
Hungry Beast stampeding towards me 
Heart racing mind pacing i gotta flee
I just wanna go back to my grass
Its to late the beast caught up and thats my ass
Lifeless being torn limb from limb i noticed his grass was blood red
Mmm my grass WAS greener to bad im dead...
.....
.....
.....
.....
"Rest in Pieces I hope it was worth a different shade of green"




Copyright © Jeriku ... [ 2011-12-22 07:12:12]
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Re: Shades of Green (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 10:22:43 PM AEST
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Your message was great. I like the red and green theme.




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