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I'm In Love
Contributed by
Jaima
on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Carefully you hold me,
With loving embrace,
Knowing we will forever be,
In love forever more.
Carefully you kiss me,
Filling me wiht every inch of joy,
Asleep in each others arms,
In love forever more.
Softly you say 'I love you',
As I smile back at you,
A gental tear falls from my eye,
As i begin to cry,
Knowing that this is real,
In love forever more.
Copyright ©
Jaima
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2003-05-03 15:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'm In Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 03:46:11 PM AEST (User
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Lovely write.....enjoyed it...
Jenni |
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Re: I'm In Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 11:29:15 PM AEST (User
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perfectly done, jaimee
Lindsey |
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Re: I'm In Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:55:12 AM AEST (User
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thanks *smiles* |
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Re: I'm In Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:00:40 AM AEST (User
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i dont know about perfectly heh..but thanks |
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Re: I'm In Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by MrMcBiggums on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 02:52:50 PM AEST (User
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Well done.... i can relate to the feelings from this poem, and i hope yours lasts forever. |
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