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you'll be suprised

Contributed by spooky on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I have been through the loves and loses,,
of life itself,,
hearts have been broken,,
feelings have been shattered,,
what now,,what do i do ,,
i love them,,but wont let me in,,
why,,

I have tried to find answers in them,,
but sometimes it was hard to face ,,
the sitituation in hand,,
not by arguements,,or hatered,,
but to take it slow,,talk things out,,
if they dont want to talk,,
walk away,,you deserve better,,

I've walked away many times,,
feelings shattered by words,,
head held low ,,
with tears in my eye's,,
but i stood up and said,,
I'M Better than that,,
I deserve better,,
and then you'll have it,,

believe in yourself first,,
that your better,,
than you will gain more,,
you must look ahead,,
not behind,,you find one heart waiting for you,,

you will be suprised,,

craig s. meeks




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Re: you'll be suprised (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:20:53 PM AEST
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This poem has a lot of meaning behind it doesn't it? I can see what your words mean And there great...


Re: you'll be suprised (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 04:01:39 PM AEST
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Craig I love this poem and its so very true!!! Thanks for sharing!!
Michelle


Re: you'll be suprised (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 04:17:06 PM AEST
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i love this poem:) hugs nessa


Re: you'll be suprised (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 05:17:12 PM AEST
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good message, lovely write
Psyhco Dolphin


Re: you'll be suprised (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 10:48:02 PM AEST
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You do deserve better! Great peice!
Christina




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