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[aid] => Mick
[title] => you'll be suprised
[time] => 2003-05-03 13:05:00
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[bodytext] => I have been through the loves and loses,,
of life itself,,
hearts have been broken,,
feelings have been shattered,,
what now,,what do i do ,,
i love them,,but wont let me in,,
why,,
I have tried to find answers in them,,
but sometimes it was hard to face ,,
the sitituation in hand,,
not by arguements,,or hatered,,
but to take it slow,,talk things out,,
if they dont want to talk,,
walk away,,you deserve better,,
I've walked away many times,,
feelings shattered by words,,
head held low ,,
with tears in my eye's,,
but i stood up and said,,
I'M Better than that,,
I deserve better,,
and then you'll have it,,
believe in yourself first,,
that your better,,
than you will gain more,,
you must look ahead,,
not behind,,you find one heart waiting for you,,
you will be suprised,,
craig s. meeks
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you'll be suprised
Contributed by
spooky
on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I have been through the loves and loses,,
of life itself,,
hearts have been broken,,
feelings have been shattered,,
what now,,what do i do ,,
i love them,,but wont let me in,,
why,,
I have tried to find answers in them,,
but sometimes it was hard to face ,,
the sitituation in hand,,
not by arguements,,or hatered,,
but to take it slow,,talk things out,,
if they dont want to talk,,
walk away,,you deserve better,,
I've walked away many times,,
feelings shattered by words,,
head held low ,,
with tears in my eye's,,
but i stood up and said,,
I'M Better than that,,
I deserve better,,
and then you'll have it,,
believe in yourself first,,
that your better,,
than you will gain more,,
you must look ahead,,
not behind,,you find one heart waiting for you,,
you will be suprised,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2003-05-03 13:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: you'll be suprised
(User Rating: 1 ) by Metalmouth666 on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:20:53 PM AEST (User
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This poem has a lot of meaning behind it doesn't it? I can see what your words mean And there great... |
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Re: you'll be suprised
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 04:01:39 PM AEST (User
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Craig I love this poem and its so very true!!! Thanks for sharing!!
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Re: you'll be suprised
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
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i love this poem:) hugs nessa |
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Re: you'll be suprised
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
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good message, lovely write
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Re: you'll be suprised
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
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You do deserve better! Great peice!
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