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Array ( [sid] => 169443 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Saved by the Ground [time] => 2011-12-19 14:44:42 [hometext] => This is about a person who couldn't take their peers bullying anymore so they jumped off the school roof. I wrote it as a joke at first but then a couple of my friends said it was good so i decided to post it... [bodytext] => The laughing never stopped
every instant
filled with despair
they grinned
over my misery
sick grins

Anger, Pain
Exhaustion
Did they know what they were doing?
The pain they caused?
Harmlessly teasing, they called it

I knew better

Eyes Closed
One step
And it would all be over

Slipping, Falling
Cold wind
Blowing
Saving me from all the pain
they had caused

Nostrils flared
Slowly falling
To the ground
A safe haven

No misery
No Pain
No more

It had all ended today
Saved by the Ground [comments] => 2 [counter] => 75 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Homeslice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Saved by the Ground

Contributed by Homeslice on Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 02:44:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The laughing never stopped
every instant
filled with despair
they grinned
over my misery
sick grins

Anger, Pain
Exhaustion
Did they know what they were doing?
The pain they caused?
Harmlessly teasing, they called it

I knew better

Eyes Closed
One step
And it would all be over

Slipping, Falling
Cold wind
Blowing
Saving me from all the pain
they had caused

Nostrils flared
Slowly falling
To the ground
A safe haven

No misery
No Pain
No more

It had all ended today
Saved by the Ground

Copyright © Homeslice ... [ 2011-12-19 14:44:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Saved by the Ground (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 05:05:49 PM AEST
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Your friends were right. This needs to be posted,to show the consequences of making fun of others. Going along with the
crowd is a coward's way of not being another subject of ridicule. Stand up, and part from those people, and others will admire you
and follow you in time! Thanks for taking this stand!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob)

Re: Saved by the Ground (User Rating: 1 )
by BritVent on Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 05:41:49 PM AEST
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I like this a lot.

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