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through the forest
Contributed by
Ellewood
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 01:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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walking through the forest
among the trees
walking hand in hand
feeling the summer breeze
quietly going along
inhaling deeply
you say yes
this is where we belong
side by side
with the love we feel
it is this love
that will help us heal
the fresh pine scent
the cloudless sky
the warm summer sun
oh honey our fun
has only just begun
I have a surprise for you
he says to me
oh my what possibly
could it be
a lovely place to call our own
just you and me
come with me if you please
it is just beyond these trees
taking my hand
he takes the lead
up ahead to a piece of land
now close your eyes
my love
he says to me
and what do I see
a cozy little home
built just for two
what a surprise
I never knew
thank you love
I say to him
how lucky we are
that our love got us this far
through the forest
beyond the tress
there is a place
if you please
where two people love
and there is a beautiful view
of all the stars up above
and the first morning dew
to share this
place we should
but this is ours only
a place made of wood..and love
Copyright ©
Ellewood
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2011-12-13 13:24:43]
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Re: through the forest
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 08:30:39 PM AEST
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'Ppears to me this place is a nice place to be or dream to be. Alluring 'n' peaceful all in one good little piece here.
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Re: through the forest
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by aliopterix on
Tuesday, 13th December 2011 @ 08:41:24 PM AEST
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| So so evocative. I wish this poem continued on and on without end it is so good! Thank you, Aliopterix |
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Re: through the forest
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by gina on
Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 03:12:26 AM AEST
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| your poem made me dream of that lovely place ~~ nice one |
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Re: through the forest
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by Tracy on
Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 10:30:20 AM AEST
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"the fresh pine scent
the cloudless sky
the warm summer sun"
My favorite part. I can smell it, see it, feel it. I want to be walking in these woods. :)
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