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When I left, it tore me apart; the pain has only dulled with time.
You said it was for the best, and we could still be friends,
But it turns out, like all things; it came to an abrupt end.

Now such time has passed, and never a word from you,
And I’ve tried to move on and all the things you’re meant to do.
Still you’re always there, on the edge of consciousness, the back of my mind,
I thought we’d be forever, that we had a tie that binds.

So now I’m meant to get on with it, to find someone else, someone new,
I do want to, I really do, I’m just not sure what to do.
You’ll always be there with me, till the day I die,
I can’t find the right words to say goodbye.

Hopefully one day I’ll get past all of this, I’ll find my way once again,
I’ll be able to give my heart to another and the will not to bend.
But until that time comes, I honestly don’t know what to do,
Because the truth is, even after all these years, I’m still lost without you.
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Lost Without You

Contributed by angelus8663 on Sunday, 11th December 2011 @ 02:25:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It’s been so long, feels such a long time, I have no reason and no rhyme,
When I left, it tore me apart; the pain has only dulled with time.
You said it was for the best, and we could still be friends,
But it turns out, like all things; it came to an abrupt end.

Now such time has passed, and never a word from you,
And I’ve tried to move on and all the things you’re meant to do.
Still you’re always there, on the edge of consciousness, the back of my mind,
I thought we’d be forever, that we had a tie that binds.

So now I’m meant to get on with it, to find someone else, someone new,
I do want to, I really do, I’m just not sure what to do.
You’ll always be there with me, till the day I die,
I can’t find the right words to say goodbye.

Hopefully one day I’ll get past all of this, I’ll find my way once again,
I’ll be able to give my heart to another and the will not to bend.
But until that time comes, I honestly don’t know what to do,
Because the truth is, even after all these years, I’m still lost without you.




Copyright © angelus8663 ... [ 2011-12-11 14:25:02]
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Re: Lost Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by munchkin3067 on Sunday, 11th December 2011 @ 11:07:30 PM AEST
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i love your poem, i can relate to it, and ur writing is very good (: im sorry you miss her though


Re: Lost Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Leena on Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 05:53:52 AM AEST
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Great poem!


Re: Lost Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 02:56:35 PM AEST
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Finding contentment in your sorrows,
like the Bible hero Job did, is the
path to forgiving and forgetting. For
there are stages of grief, not the least
of which is bitterness and anger! Watch
out. It's coming. I've been there. The next
step is to forgive, let go, and then let God!
Blessings,
Rob
(Robert Edgar Burns)


Re: Lost Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 04:18:57 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great way find the answer in your own writing.
Huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy


Re: Lost Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by clae-marie on Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 02:36:50 PM AEST
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great poem, but sad..




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