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Array ( [sid] => 169206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Self Confusion [time] => 2011-12-11 10:06:53 [hometext] => Everyday questions in a thoughtful mind. [bodytext] => Chemical or spiritual,
mechanical or inspirational?
Is the role I'm playing factual or fictional?
Loving or caring,
selfish or obsessive?
Am I living the dream or being oppressive?
Are my efforts in vain?
Should I try harder still?
Are the choices I make of my own freewill?
Do I even exist or a product of society?
A humble poor shepherd,
or a thunderous deity?
Joyous or submissive,
Loved or distraught?
Think of the wounded, spare them a thought.
Are my values too precious,
would I reach out to my foe?
I'm perplexed at a crossroads not sure which way to go?
Do my words comfort others,
do my actions cause harm?
Do my attempts to reach you cause sudden alarm?
Are the answers I give what you want to hear?
Am I driven by love,
or prevented by fear? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 89 [topic] => 21 [informant] => dannye103 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Self Confusion

Contributed by dannye103 on Sunday, 11th December 2011 @ 10:06:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Chemical or spiritual,
mechanical or inspirational?
Is the role I'm playing factual or fictional?
Loving or caring,
selfish or obsessive?
Am I living the dream or being oppressive?
Are my efforts in vain?
Should I try harder still?
Are the choices I make of my own freewill?
Do I even exist or a product of society?
A humble poor shepherd,
or a thunderous deity?
Joyous or submissive,
Loved or distraught?
Think of the wounded, spare them a thought.
Are my values too precious,
would I reach out to my foe?
I'm perplexed at a crossroads not sure which way to go?
Do my words comfort others,
do my actions cause harm?
Do my attempts to reach you cause sudden alarm?
Are the answers I give what you want to hear?
Am I driven by love,
or prevented by fear?

Copyright © dannye103 ... [ 2011-12-11 10:06:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Self Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by aliopterix on Monday, 12th December 2011 @ 12:54:10 AM AEST
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Love the juxtaposition of the dichotomies here, at least I think that's what I mean to say! Nice read, Thank you,

Aliopterix

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