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Array ( [sid] => 169066 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Beginning. [time] => 2011-12-06 06:15:01 [hometext] => Dawn Is a precious time and there is nothing more precious than watching the rise of a new day over the mountains. [bodytext] => Razor blades of light
Are cutting through the darkness
As dawn snuggles closer to the bosom of the land.
In the silence of the forest
All ancient history is unfolding
And the badger, fox and owl fade together
Into the warm embrace of another day.
Through the coyness of the high tops
A breeze meanders slowly,
Softly, gently uplifting the gloomy essence
Of this solitary place.
The stars are hitching a ride on the moon
And the horizon parts with a murmur
Letting in light at the world's beginning. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 27 [informant] => cashfan1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

The Beginning.

Contributed by cashfan1 on Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 06:15:01 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Razor blades of light
Are cutting through the darkness
As dawn snuggles closer to the bosom of the land.
In the silence of the forest
All ancient history is unfolding
And the badger, fox and owl fade together
Into the warm embrace of another day.
Through the coyness of the high tops
A breeze meanders slowly,
Softly, gently uplifting the gloomy essence
Of this solitary place.
The stars are hitching a ride on the moon
And the horizon parts with a murmur
Letting in light at the world's beginning.

Copyright © cashfan1 ... [ 2011-12-06 06:15:01]
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Re: The Beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 06:32:46 AM AEST
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That was beautiful. I am a nature child myself. Thank you for sharing.

Re: The Beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 07:14:45 AM AEST
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Love the way this flows
thanx
for sharing.....

Re: The Beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 09:56:47 AM AEST
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I can almost see the rays of light
coming through the darkest night!
Beautiful,
Rob

Re: The Beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 10:58:17 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,

And the stories are carried on the wind.

If only the badger, fox, and owl could talk.
Well, maybe they don't need to - they've got
you.

Tommy

Re: The Beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 02:57:35 PM AEST
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Beautiful word picture.
Awesome.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: The Beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 02:07:23 PM AEST
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May you always take me to be reunited with Nature as this is always where I long to be. Thank-you Dennis,it is always a pleasure to walk with you x

Re: The Beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 02:39:26 PM AEST
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You never fail to impress me, Dennis. Love the way you can paint pictures with words.

Picture perfect.

Tim

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