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Array ( [sid] => 169050 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Revenge [time] => 2011-12-05 18:19:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We used to be close you were everything to me,
We did almost anything and you made me happy.
Those long nights together at first were fun,
But then ***** went bad you made me want to run.

Fighting every day making up every night,
With you there was darkness not a single hint of light.
I'd cry and I'd swear and I'd pull my hair out,
That's not what relationships are supposed to be about.

That day when you left I just wanted to die,
Night after night I would just want to cry.
Then I realized that you made my life worse,
You were not a blessing you were a curse.

You made me argue with my family and hate my friends,
Now I am thankful for relationship dead ends.
Your personality is as ugly as your face,
Those two frickin years were such a waste.

You're a fighter, you're a liar and a control-hungry girl,
You are a piece of coal not a pearl.
I hope karma hits you like a train.
For all the times you put me through pain.

This is my revenge I want everyone to know,
The way things really were you were so low.
You called me names I will not repeat,
You are a creature that no man will defeat.

“He's mean, he hit me, he went behind my back”,
These things you said are out of whack.
I don't hate you cause hate's not strong enough,
Never seeing you again will not be tough.

You changed my life in a very bad way,
For what you did to me you will pay.
There are bad things about you that I could tell,
But I'd rather go to heaven while you go to hell. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 98 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SUFan918 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
My Revenge

Contributed by SUFan918 on Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 06:19:17 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



We used to be close you were everything to me,
We did almost anything and you made me happy.
Those long nights together at first were fun,
But then ***** went bad you made me want to run.

Fighting every day making up every night,
With you there was darkness not a single hint of light.
I'd cry and I'd swear and I'd pull my hair out,
That's not what relationships are supposed to be about.

That day when you left I just wanted to die,
Night after night I would just want to cry.
Then I realized that you made my life worse,
You were not a blessing you were a curse.

You made me argue with my family and hate my friends,
Now I am thankful for relationship dead ends.
Your personality is as ugly as your face,
Those two frickin years were such a waste.

You're a fighter, you're a liar and a control-hungry girl,
You are a piece of coal not a pearl.
I hope karma hits you like a train.
For all the times you put me through pain.

This is my revenge I want everyone to know,
The way things really were you were so low.
You called me names I will not repeat,
You are a creature that no man will defeat.

“He's mean, he hit me, he went behind my back”,
These things you said are out of whack.
I don't hate you cause hate's not strong enough,
Never seeing you again will not be tough.

You changed my life in a very bad way,
For what you did to me you will pay.
There are bad things about you that I could tell,
But I'd rather go to heaven while you go to hell.




Copyright © SUFan918 ... [ 2011-12-05 18:19:17]
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Re: My Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by applehead on Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 10:53:17 PM AEST
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truely not something anyone should have to go thru but it made a great poem, thanks for sharing it with total strangers.




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