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Array ( [sid] => 169026 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => And I was lost [time] => 2011-12-04 21:36:54 [hometext] => This is my first poem and would like someones opinion I wrote this for my girlfriend and m wondering if it's worth giving to her [bodytext] => In a world so dark ,
Any light we hardly see
All alone I walk
So black,so cold
The vastness grips my heart
Pulling me into this forbidden place
I see not where I m goin
Nor where I from
I have no place , no ease of mind

I have dreams , but seem so far
I hope , I pray ,I need some light
For in my heart ,I am losing life
Walk so dark ,so long
Pure and bright, you lose all that

When I feel I have lost all faith
I stumble, I fall, I find myself
Caught so gentle , like a breeze
In your arms , I see your face
The beauty of it steals my gaze
The love in your eyes melts my heart
Like the wind , you flight my wings
Forever and always by my side
Sweet and true you are my life [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Badboylilbituf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

And I was lost

Contributed by Badboylilbituf on Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 09:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

In a world so dark ,
Any light we hardly see
All alone I walk
So black,so cold
The vastness grips my heart
Pulling me into this forbidden place
I see not where I m goin
Nor where I from
I have no place , no ease of mind

I have dreams , but seem so far
I hope , I pray ,I need some light
For in my heart ,I am losing life
Walk so dark ,so long
Pure and bright, you lose all that

When I feel I have lost all faith
I stumble, I fall, I find myself
Caught so gentle , like a breeze
In your arms , I see your face
The beauty of it steals my gaze
The love in your eyes melts my heart
Like the wind , you flight my wings
Forever and always by my side
Sweet and true you are my life

Copyright © Badboylilbituf ... [ 2011-12-04 21:36:54]
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Re: And I was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 12:52:00 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Gret job.
I'm sure she'll like it.
Blessings,
emy

Re: And I was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 07:13:33 PM AEST
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I think it's a beautiful poem. She should love it!

Re: And I was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 06:05:22 AM AEST
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Your poem conveys the love and hope you feel for your love. It's a very nice write, good job.

Re: And I was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by funmi on Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 06:46:38 AM AEST
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Love It.... My Advice is give her when u know its definetly meant to be .... its best at that point

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