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Array ( [sid] => 169022 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => race armagedon [time] => 2011-12-04 15:32:12 [hometext] => this poem is about stoping racism. we may be all different but yet we are equal. thats my point. [bodytext] => race armagedon
fought yesterday
fout once ag....ain
i pick up my pen
then pick up my pencil
which one is better
there both writting utencils

this isnt a fight
between good vs evil
this is a war among sides
that dont know there equal
this movie never stops
just one whole big sequel
I pick up my pen and pick up my pencil
i write witth them both
and they both do
what they need to

one is with lead
the other with ink
the world is a ship
and we are all one crew
all different yet true
if we dont unite we will sink

we need to unite in balance
kus we need to
or else this race armagedon will continue
we are all diffrent but yet
we are all equal

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race armagedon

Contributed by lyricalpoet on Sunday, 4th December 2011 @ 03:32:12 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

race armagedon
fought yesterday
fout once ag....ain
i pick up my pen
then pick up my pencil
which one is better
there both writting utencils

this isnt a fight
between good vs evil
this is a war among sides
that dont know there equal
this movie never stops
just one whole big sequel
I pick up my pen and pick up my pencil
i write witth them both
and they both do
what they need to

one is with lead
the other with ink
the world is a ship
and we are all one crew
all different yet true
if we dont unite we will sink

we need to unite in balance
kus we need to
or else this race armagedon will continue
we are all diffrent but yet
we are all equal

Copyright © lyricalpoet ... [ 2011-12-04 15:32:12]
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Re: race armagedon (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 12:43:23 PM AEST
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Good write.
So true.
blessings,
emy
Don't be disappointed. You did good on the subject;

Re: race armagedon (User Rating: 1 )
by applehead on Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 08:59:23 AM AEST
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And your poem is quite striking, getting to the core of whats wrong with this world. People like you are important! I wished there were a lot more of you out there maybe we wouldn't be in the mess we are currently in. Thanks for sharing it and keep it up.

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