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[sid] => 16901
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => 'Til Death Do Us Part?
[time] => 2003-05-02 18:35:00
[hometext] => very touching, considering the source. romantic in a suicidal sort of way. the lament of a widowed man.
[bodytext] => you tried to hide the pain inside
but i could see it in your eyes would never admit your suffering hid behind a wall of lies i wonder why you never asked for help why you never came to me now it's too late, can't reach you where you are on the otherside of eternity you pushed me away you would not let me in you refused to ask for help you could not do it alone so rather than turn to me you simply killed yourself at first i hated you, i was so p**t off i couldn't understand why you wouldn't let me be there for you you wouldn't even let me try said that you were fine, and i shouldn't worry then the subject was quickly changed now i'm here alone, in this world without you and it feels so ***** strange you pushed me away you would not let me in you refused to ask for help you could not do it alone so rather than turn to me you simply killed yourself i guess i was selfish, i wanted to save you for me i couldn't imagine life without you now inside my head, i might as well be dead cuz all i do is think about you reliving memories, recalling every smile confined inside our collective past the present doesn't exist, i only know "before" life like this surely cannot last you pushed me away you would not let me in you refused to ask for help you could not do it alone so rather than turn to me you simply killed yourself we were so much alike, can't believe it took so long for me to see that, even now, that does not end so now with razor in hand, i will be with you again my life, my love, my friend tears in my eyes, no one left to hear my goodbyes this time spent all alone, now through my final thought is of the promise i gave "wherever you are, i'll be there too" you pushed me away but, knew i'd never stay too far from you, my love, so true now with your hand in mine, i feel complete my heaven is right here beside you whether heaven, hell, or naught, it doesn't matter you will always live inside my heart i told you before, and i meant every word even in Death, we will not part [comments] => 4 [counter] => 463 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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