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Array ( [sid] => 16897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => You really had control of me [time] => 2003-05-02 16:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => someday you will see
you wont mean a ***** to me
I've been quiet for so long
but the desire of screaming is now to strong
all this years of pain and shame
I've now quit your silly game
I was the child you were the adult
and you were the one doing all the scold
I'm tired of your injustice
tired of your schemes
your disgusting
a thought of you makes me wanna scream
You tell me I'm wrong
Then you better prove you're right
I'm getting stronger
And won't give up the fight
people need to see
you were the one who's been hurting me
I'm tired of being the victim of hate
Your raping me of my pride
Oh for God's sake
This time I'll never get bit
Though you really wanna fix me,hit me
This time you're making me sick
Though you really wanna get me
This time I'm taking no *****
You really want to use me
And then falsely accuse me
You really had control of me
you really had a hold on me

But not anymore
sorry you couldn't finish your score




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You really had control of me

Contributed by MissMichelle on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



someday you will see
you wont mean a ***** to me
I've been quiet for so long
but the desire of screaming is now to strong
all this years of pain and shame
I've now quit your silly game
I was the child you were the adult
and you were the one doing all the scold
I'm tired of your injustice
tired of your schemes
your disgusting
a thought of you makes me wanna scream
You tell me I'm wrong
Then you better prove you're right
I'm getting stronger
And won't give up the fight
people need to see
you were the one who's been hurting me
I'm tired of being the victim of hate
Your raping me of my pride
Oh for God's sake
This time I'll never get bit
Though you really wanna fix me,hit me
This time you're making me sick
Though you really wanna get me
This time I'm taking no *****
You really want to use me
And then falsely accuse me
You really had control of me
you really had a hold on me

But not anymore
sorry you couldn't finish your score








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Re: You really had control of me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:18:10 PM AEST
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WOW!! this packs a punch. Sad but well written.
You must be s spit fire like me!! Stand your ground!! Another great poem.
Michelle


Re: You really had control of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:34:00 PM AEST
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Way to go, Michelle!! Welcome to ypdc.. . loved this emotional write... hope all is well.
Jenni


Re: You really had control of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:16:24 PM AEST
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I had to read this twice..you have captured the true feelings of being so controled....you think your life is over and then you had enough....I hope you have a better life now....well written....take care!!


Re: You really had control of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaima on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:25:10 AM AEST
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good poem..well done...*smiles*


Re: You really had control of me (User Rating: 1 )
by arakrune on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:17:59 PM AEST
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i like this it has puch and emotion spills out from it


Re: You really had control of me (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:19:45 PM AEST
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wow good poem...very emotional has alot of meaning. good job keep writing




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