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Array ( [sid] => 168958 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => tired of seeing [time] => 2011-12-01 18:05:12 [hometext] => im gonna write a poem showing life issues that people go threw that im tired of seeing in society [bodytext] =>



wish i could pass that dream
that i had the night before ........................
my life out at sea
drifting gently out to shore
i fought threw the storms
kept up with the waves
i belong in heavens door
i wish i could see the same experience
happen to somebody else
i find my way in steps to heaven
while somebody else
is being drifted out to hells trap door'
im tired of seeing poeples life collpase
way before my eyes can tell
im tired of seeing young kids grow up
make somebad desciones
they may sound wealthy
when i say they they have 2 homes
the streets and alife in prsion
do you think its fair
that one descion took that persons life
to prsion
we all make mistakes rich or poor
we all make bad desciones
just becuase we are at the bottom of the pyramid
that makes us a delinquint
we all see the seguence
low life dont matter
while the poorer get poorer
the rich pockets get fatter
but what happend in 9/11 when the towers fell
i remember that chapter
yes those highjackers wen to hell
but i remember another chapter
look at what this nation has done in the past
past present future
before now and after
droped a bomb in a place were thousands of innocents lifes fannished in a flash passes away
okay yea they attacked us first
and we realiated next
but when someone kills one of my fam
and dang i kill them
guess what happens handcuffs on me
another boy in jail is next
a cop get rewarded for taking a life
and a young man gets more fined
for risisting arrest
i live my life the best that i can do it
but how can i live among this world that stupid
everyone has a status and whatevers happens
they are responsible for it
so when a heart is tored i should blame cupid for it?
na im tired
of hearing news reports
that unemployment has droppped
so many familys that fought in this country to make it way up top
and now the richer get richer and the poorers life has stoped
so many family that struggle to live
how can u expect someone to keep living there life when youve cuaght of there bridge
there exhusted you have there life lost on the edge
this nation makes no sence i wonder why sometimes i get up for the pledge
what am i really standing for
im tired of this
i cant take this anymore
treated diffrent becuase we live in the lowlife door
we all have made mistakes enough to cover up a whole line shore
but each of mistakes dont matter more or more than the other
becuase maybe you may have a richer dad and mother
why did i even right this poem
this is aint goona change
why even bother to keep typing
i can keep saying why im tired
but nothing ever gonna change

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tired of seeing

Contributed by lyricalpoet on Thursday, 1st December 2011 @ 06:05:12 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry







wish i could pass that dream
that i had the night before ........................
my life out at sea
drifting gently out to shore
i fought threw the storms
kept up with the waves
i belong in heavens door
i wish i could see the same experience
happen to somebody else
i find my way in steps to heaven
while somebody else
is being drifted out to hells trap door'
im tired of seeing poeples life collpase
way before my eyes can tell
im tired of seeing young kids grow up
make somebad desciones
they may sound wealthy
when i say they they have 2 homes
the streets and alife in prsion
do you think its fair
that one descion took that persons life
to prsion
we all make mistakes rich or poor
we all make bad desciones
just becuase we are at the bottom of the pyramid
that makes us a delinquint
we all see the seguence
low life dont matter
while the poorer get poorer
the rich pockets get fatter
but what happend in 9/11 when the towers fell
i remember that chapter
yes those highjackers wen to hell
but i remember another chapter
look at what this nation has done in the past
past present future
before now and after
droped a bomb in a place were thousands of innocents lifes fannished in a flash passes away
okay yea they attacked us first
and we realiated next
but when someone kills one of my fam
and dang i kill them
guess what happens handcuffs on me
another boy in jail is next
a cop get rewarded for taking a life
and a young man gets more fined
for risisting arrest
i live my life the best that i can do it
but how can i live among this world that stupid
everyone has a status and whatevers happens
they are responsible for it
so when a heart is tored i should blame cupid for it?
na im tired
of hearing news reports
that unemployment has droppped
so many familys that fought in this country to make it way up top
and now the richer get richer and the poorers life has stoped
so many family that struggle to live
how can u expect someone to keep living there life when youve cuaght of there bridge
there exhusted you have there life lost on the edge
this nation makes no sence i wonder why sometimes i get up for the pledge
what am i really standing for
im tired of this
i cant take this anymore
treated diffrent becuase we live in the lowlife door
we all have made mistakes enough to cover up a whole line shore
but each of mistakes dont matter more or more than the other
becuase maybe you may have a richer dad and mother
why did i even right this poem
this is aint goona change
why even bother to keep typing
i can keep saying why im tired
but nothing ever gonna change





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