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This Girl
Contributed by
Thelma
on
Wednesday, 30th November 2011 @ 05:02:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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There was once a girl,
She likes to twirl,
She spins like a bird,
But doesn't act like a nerd,
With her beautiful smile,
She dresses with style,
Her face is always bold,
But, with a heart so cold.
Copyright ©
Thelma
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2011-11-30 17:02:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: This Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by doug on
Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 03:04:31 PM AEST (User
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Short and to the point. I like the little twist at the end. Heart so cold. Hmmm leaves questions unanswered. Good work , truly , Doug |
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Re: This Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by applehead on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 10:32:08 PM AEST (User
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I like it when a poem gets to the point. Great poem sounds like a girl I'd like too meet. |
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Re: This Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Thelma on
Wednesday, 14th December 2011 @ 06:42:46 PM AEST (User
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Thank You All So Much :) |
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