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Mist
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 05:42:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mist
The mist you perpetuate is not what I desire
You’re pessimistic ways bring such sadness to my days
I in total opposite live life with optimism
Half full, not half empty
Never wait to fail
Prepare to succeed
You need to take your negativity, look real hard at yourself
Take a positive stance, to your circumstance
Your mist needs a twist
Give it some spin and some pizzhas
Stop being such a spaz
By banjosandwitch 28/11/11
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2011-11-29 05:42:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mist
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 06:13:29 AM AEST (User
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Dear Banjosandwich,
Nicely put. . . we could all benefit from standing as close as possible to nearest mirror & examining ourselves on this earth plane. . .
Thanks for sharing
L~ |
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Re: Mist
(User Rating: 1 ) by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 06:13:42 AM AEST (User
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The line "Your mist needs a twist" is genius! I really like this poem. It conveys its message in a quiet strong way. Nice write. |
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