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Emotions running high
swirling with the winds
deep inside I feel
another storm brewing again.

Melting within the world
walking in the rain.
Blending in the shadows
when the sun went away.

Such is life it seems
nature has her voice.
We mix with dark clouds
find beauty, its our choice.

Michelle C Hamlin
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The Storm

Contributed by shelby on Sunday, 27th November 2011 @ 01:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

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Emotions running high
swirling with the winds
deep inside I feel
another storm brewing again.

Melting within the world
walking in the rain.
Blending in the shadows
when the sun went away.

Such is life it seems
nature has her voice.
We mix with dark clouds
find beauty, its our choice.

Michelle C Hamlin
photo Michelle C Hamlin

Copyright Â© shelby ... [ 2011-11-27 13:08:43]
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Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Sunday, 27th November 2011 @ 05:09:42 PM AEST
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Finding beauty in the midst of
the storm, and knowing it is
our own choice is very wise
indeed! Enjoyed this shelby!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob)

Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 03:08:18 AM AEST
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Pivotal line nature has her voice! and so right in stating that choice is always there if not necessarily seen or recognised.Empathic and expressive and spoken as one who knows the storm well.

Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 07:14:03 PM AEST
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Good work girlfriend. Great to see a post from you any time.
Blessings,
emy

Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 07:16:53 PM AEST
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You rock Michelle! Really likin' this one! Like the anaolgy/metaphor. We are all one with the earth...all part of it and each other. Energy.

Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Thursday, 1st December 2011 @ 10:55:43 AM AEST
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Nice. Give us more.

ming

Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 02:40:07 PM AEST
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I like the "you take the picture I'll paint it in words or I'll paint it in words you take the picture" of yer presentation, Michelle. Hey, it's cowboy poet. Always loved yer stuff 'n' still do. Kudos.
wabl
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