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Though many before you had tried and had failed, and that makes you come out on top

You gave me your time and comforted me, attentive - my body you touched
Turning me on, making me shiver to the brink that was almost too much

But you never quit, you kept me so warm, relaxed me and you persevered
Was it all you or my feelings too? You made me forget all my fears

Taking your time, pretending you're mine, you rocked me and made me so free
One night of passion was worth all the hurt, engulfing, colliding you see

All the right moves, a skill you possess, or was it me who turned you on?
Your closeness I embraced, for once not one way, this feeling you gave me so strong

Made me complete and make me feel real, your fingers and lips so in tune
So I'm thanking you for how you gave me that feeling no others could do [comments] => 2 [counter] => 133 [topic] => 48 [informant] => The_Contradiction [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Lonely Climax

Contributed by The_Contradiction on Tuesday, 22nd November 2011 @ 10:25:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You know what you did and you were the first, to give me what others could not
Though many before you had tried and had failed, and that makes you come out on top

You gave me your time and comforted me, attentive - my body you touched
Turning me on, making me shiver to the brink that was almost too much

But you never quit, you kept me so warm, relaxed me and you persevered
Was it all you or my feelings too? You made me forget all my fears

Taking your time, pretending you're mine, you rocked me and made me so free
One night of passion was worth all the hurt, engulfing, colliding you see

All the right moves, a skill you possess, or was it me who turned you on?
Your closeness I embraced, for once not one way, this feeling you gave me so strong

Made me complete and make me feel real, your fingers and lips so in tune
So I'm thanking you for how you gave me that feeling no others could do

Copyright © The_Contradiction ... [ 2011-11-22 10:25:07]
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Re: The Lonely Climax (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Tuesday, 22nd November 2011 @ 09:09:44 PM AEST
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The heart breaks itself.

Keep writing.

Re: The Lonely Climax (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Contradiction on Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 03:44:26 PM AEST
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I will :) Writing helps the pain of the soul.

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