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Array ( [sid] => 168727 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without You. [time] => 2011-11-20 23:45:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Today is the last day of my life.
Even if I do not die, I am already dead inside.
Empty and shattered, how much worse can it get?
But I’m always surprised.
I don’t know why, after all the time why.
It’s always the same line, day after day.
Someone please save me from the unstoppable.
The impossible is possible, if you believe.
But I don’t, and never had.

There was a time I remember, not so long ago but I forgot.
All the things I said to you, but how I regret it.
Why did you leave?
I'm not sure, but now that you're gone a piece of me is missing.
Won't you please return it?
And come back to me.
Please come home.
I sit and wait, staring up at the sun hoping I will be blinded by it's darkness.
For I have nothing left to see for, without your face.
I hold my breath, hoping it will be my last.
Taking a deep breath, I tell myself it will get better, but I don't believe it will.

Sometimes I think of your eyes, just your eyes.
But why can't I remember your face?
I want to, but maybe it's been too long.
So many things I wish I could tell you, but I forgot.
So much regret, and still I miss you.
Please come home.

Memories eat away at me until I’m dead.
I’m inching closer every day.
Memories remembered, some repressed.
What were they? I don’t know and don’t care to think.
Of all the times we were together, I never wished it would end, but it always did.
But no more bad thoughts, no more…
But it never stops, the thoughts come back as soon as I forget.

Sometimes I lose my mind, and wonder where it went.
Hopefully somewhere better then this.
I don’t blame it.
Someday I’ll take us both away, to someplace safe. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 110 [topic] => 32 [informant] => banda5k1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Without You.

Contributed by banda5k1 on Sunday, 20th November 2011 @ 11:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Today is the last day of my life.
Even if I do not die, I am already dead inside.
Empty and shattered, how much worse can it get?
But I’m always surprised.
I don’t know why, after all the time why.
It’s always the same line, day after day.
Someone please save me from the unstoppable.
The impossible is possible, if you believe.
But I don’t, and never had.

There was a time I remember, not so long ago but I forgot.
All the things I said to you, but how I regret it.
Why did you leave?
I'm not sure, but now that you're gone a piece of me is missing.
Won't you please return it?
And come back to me.
Please come home.
I sit and wait, staring up at the sun hoping I will be blinded by it's darkness.
For I have nothing left to see for, without your face.
I hold my breath, hoping it will be my last.
Taking a deep breath, I tell myself it will get better, but I don't believe it will.

Sometimes I think of your eyes, just your eyes.
But why can't I remember your face?
I want to, but maybe it's been too long.
So many things I wish I could tell you, but I forgot.
So much regret, and still I miss you.
Please come home.

Memories eat away at me until I’m dead.
I’m inching closer every day.
Memories remembered, some repressed.
What were they? I don’t know and don’t care to think.
Of all the times we were together, I never wished it would end, but it always did.
But no more bad thoughts, no more…
But it never stops, the thoughts come back as soon as I forget.

Sometimes I lose my mind, and wonder where it went.
Hopefully somewhere better then this.
I don’t blame it.
Someday I’ll take us both away, to someplace safe.




Copyright © banda5k1 ... [ 2011-11-20 23:45:21]
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Re: Without You. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th November 2011 @ 11:52:27 PM AEST
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Fanstastic write. luv it.
We all suffer from to time but the strong shall stand.
Your greatest treasure is your writing.
I write so I can live.
huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: Without You. (User Rating: 1 )
by AndreyFisht on Monday, 21st November 2011 @ 12:10:38 AM AEST
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One person may stay a part of other and when one leaves the whole world seems empty,only the time as they say help.Nice written.




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