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Array ( [sid] => 16863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Confused [time] => 2003-05-02 00:25:00 [hometext] => I'm confused... [bodytext] => Don't try and find me,
I'm not there,
Don't try and love me,
I don't care.
Don't spend your time on me,
I'm not worth it,
Don't attempt to piece me together,
I'm falling apart bit by bit.

Please, try to notice me,
I need your love,
Please, don't turn your back on me,
I've no help from him above.
Please, force yourself to look at my ugly face,
I do have beauty locked deep inside,
Please, don't believe i don't want to change,
I do, i promise, i've tried. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 32 [informant] => M [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Confused

Contributed by M on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Don't try and find me,
I'm not there,
Don't try and love me,
I don't care.
Don't spend your time on me,
I'm not worth it,
Don't attempt to piece me together,
I'm falling apart bit by bit.

Please, try to notice me,
I need your love,
Please, don't turn your back on me,
I've no help from him above.
Please, force yourself to look at my ugly face,
I do have beauty locked deep inside,
Please, don't believe i don't want to change,
I do, i promise, i've tried.

Copyright © M ... [ 2003-05-02 00:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 12:31:40 AM AEST
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Wow dont know what to say. When I finished I just stared and blinked at the poem. This was very good. I want to disagree with some of the lines in yer poems but I know that pisses me off when ppl do that. Good poem I hope u find the answers to your confusion.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 12:53:15 AM AEST
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Very beautiful. I've climbed that mountain yet still don't know how to get down. But i somtimes actually beleive some one will help you down.
Amy

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:24:51 AM AEST
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Another great poem M. You are fast becoming one of my favourite poets on this site. Keep up the great work.

sleepless_siren

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:45:35 AM AEST
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well done. I hope you find the peace to subdue your confusion. Its an awful feeling for sure!! Keep writing this great poetry!
Michelle

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 02:24:24 PM AEST
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Oh hun, i know i haven't commented on your poems before, and i don't know if that was a good idea or not, but listen - we'll get through this, okay?
love forever
x_x_x

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