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Array ( [sid] => 16860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Torn in Two. [time] => 2003-05-01 23:25:00 [hometext] => The title really says it all. All comments and suggestions welcome... [bodytext] => My arms are outstretched,
They've taken their sides,
I'm begginning to be torn in two.

I never wanted to have to choose,
But its like they dont even know,
Its them who is making me feel this way.

They both say i love you,
I know i want to say it back,
I know i'd mean it,
To both.

They say its alright,
That they dont mind,
But they are pulling me in two.

I scream out hey it doesnt have to be this way,
But still my arms are outstretched,
I'm being torn in two. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 21 [informant] => 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Torn in Two.

Contributed by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My arms are outstretched,
They've taken their sides,
I'm begginning to be torn in two.

I never wanted to have to choose,
But its like they dont even know,
Its them who is making me feel this way.

They both say i love you,
I know i want to say it back,
I know i'd mean it,
To both.

They say its alright,
That they dont mind,
But they are pulling me in two.

I scream out hey it doesnt have to be this way,
But still my arms are outstretched,
I'm being torn in two.

Copyright © 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 ... [ 2003-05-01 23:25:00]
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Re: Torn in Two. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:13:32 AM AEST
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quite the ouchy position...... well done poem, i wasn't sure what i was expecting with your title, but i am happy to have read this:) hugs nessa

Re: Torn in Two. (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesHowlett on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:38:20 AM AEST
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I like this poem...I can relate to the feeling. good job.

Re: Torn in Two. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:50:52 AM AEST
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Oh I wouldn't want to be in this position. Great poem. I hope that you get things worked out!!
Michelle

Re: Torn in Two. (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 05:08:29 AM AEST
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great poem but im glad im not in that postion but very good none the less

Re: Torn in Two. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 03:17:21 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem about being stuck in a very sticky situation and not being anle to find your way out. Great write.

Re: Torn in Two. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 07:28:07 AM AEST
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i'm sorry i am one of those ppl that makes you feel that way....i wont say anymore on here.But it makes me feel so bad that you feel that way.And i'm sorry.(its a great poem though!!!)

Re: Torn in Two. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 12:50:55 AM AEST
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i take back that last comment.I'm not sorry for anything.Its your own fault you felt that way because you were two timing us (little did i know at the time though or i wouldda dumped your ass)

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