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Array ( [sid] => 168544 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Wish.. [time] => 2011-11-12 17:07:00 [hometext] => :: [bodytext] => You drew a dart to my heart made me numb, took my pain away, made me bleed to never see another day..
when i saw you my heart simply melted away,
the thoughts of us being together, the look in your eyes,
the feeling of your aura..i didnt realize,
you were the angel i was lookin for in disguise right infront of my eyes,
i didnt take the chance i thought it wasent true,
but now all i wanna do is find where you are and be with you,
show you that im pure about what i feel for you,
if only you knew how dedicated i could be to you,
I just dont think you realize this,
Cause maybe you dont believe anyone could like someone like this,
Deep in your soul you know a pact like us would be so bliss,
And maybe youve been hurt in the past before,
walked away from like an open door,
left there crying alone feeling like nobody loved you,
Emptied out a whole box of tissues,
But whoever did that must have some issues,
Cause an angel like you is rare these days,
And if i had you id protect you with all my spades,
Id take your hand through the stormy rains,
Walk you out the other side in the shining sun,
And never let go of your hand,
Cause your the one i want. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => sharky23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Wish..

Contributed by sharky23 on Saturday, 12th November 2011 @ 05:07:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You drew a dart to my heart made me numb, took my pain away, made me bleed to never see another day..
when i saw you my heart simply melted away,
the thoughts of us being together, the look in your eyes,
the feeling of your aura..i didnt realize,
you were the angel i was lookin for in disguise right infront of my eyes,
i didnt take the chance i thought it wasent true,
but now all i wanna do is find where you are and be with you,
show you that im pure about what i feel for you,
if only you knew how dedicated i could be to you,
I just dont think you realize this,
Cause maybe you dont believe anyone could like someone like this,
Deep in your soul you know a pact like us would be so bliss,
And maybe youve been hurt in the past before,
walked away from like an open door,
left there crying alone feeling like nobody loved you,
Emptied out a whole box of tissues,
But whoever did that must have some issues,
Cause an angel like you is rare these days,
And if i had you id protect you with all my spades,
Id take your hand through the stormy rains,
Walk you out the other side in the shining sun,
And never let go of your hand,
Cause your the one i want.




Copyright © sharky23 ... [ 2011-11-12 17:07:00]
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Re: My Wish.. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th November 2011 @ 05:32:30 PM AEST
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Wow this is deep, beautiful, blissful, tender and I could go on but I think u get the point. It nearly brought me to tears.
Awesome write.
smiles, blessings,
emy


Re: My Wish.. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th November 2011 @ 05:35:14 PM AEST
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oh yeah, welcome to YPDC.
Your write just took me a way.


Re: My Wish.. (User Rating: 1 )
by sharky23 on Saturday, 12th November 2011 @ 05:39:48 PM AEST
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thank you so much for the comments, i wrote this from my heart, as i am feeling lately...thanks so much


Re: My Wish.. (User Rating: 1 )
by praz on Sunday, 13th November 2011 @ 12:05:57 AM AEST
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nice poem it really touched to me......wow i am speechless nice writing and thanks for sharing your poem.......


Re: My Wish.. (User Rating: 1 )
by lillady2011 on Sunday, 13th November 2011 @ 12:34:27 AM AEST
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thats was a really good poem...




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