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Array ( [sid] => 168482 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heart of the Storm [time] => 2011-11-10 03:04:15 [hometext] => Love is not just chocolate and kisses like so many people try to make it out to be. It is commitment and unwavering dedication. It is a rare person who can truly love another for a lifetime. [bodytext] => Cold air caresses tender skin...
coarse words.... creating brash feeling,
refreshing... but uncomfortable in essence,
this warmth that others are stealing...

sacrificing comfort to open others' eyes,
slowly sapping away the warmth until winter comes,
but the winter shall never fully take me,
and it is winter's lonely heart which I shun...

for it is a tattered coat of truest love that shelters this frail husk,
and it will forever stay upon these weary shoulders. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 83 [topic] => 2 [informant] => deusdeira [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Heart of the Storm

Contributed by deusdeira on Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 03:04:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Cold air caresses tender skin...
coarse words.... creating brash feeling,
refreshing... but uncomfortable in essence,
this warmth that others are stealing...

sacrificing comfort to open others' eyes,
slowly sapping away the warmth until winter comes,
but the winter shall never fully take me,
and it is winter's lonely heart which I shun...

for it is a tattered coat of truest love that shelters this frail husk,
and it will forever stay upon these weary shoulders.

Copyright © deusdeira ... [ 2011-11-10 03:04:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Heart of the Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 03:27:54 AM AEST
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Old Tattered Coat? That is definitely me! LOL!
But those coats are by far the most familiar
and comfortable, just like the oldest and most
beat up teddy bears are the ones our kids
reach for the most. Good observation and
great job communicating these points.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob)

Re: Heart of the Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Monday, 28th November 2011 @ 03:34:45 PM AEST
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'Heart of the Storm' is a stunning real-life love poem. It deserves to be read over and over again. The last two lines are incredibly poetic -- so powerful -- so perfect! --David aka FH

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