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Array ( [sid] => 16847 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Brave. [time] => 2003-05-01 18:35:00 [hometext] => This poem isnt really that good, it's about two people one I have already written about and posted poems on here about, and someone I have not. They are both amazing people in their own ways. If you could post your comments or suggestions on this or any of my poems I'd really appreciate it, I'd love to be able to have more skills to write with. [bodytext] => Sometimes it seems so surreal,
Sometimes I cannot beleive just how much I feel,
I started to drown into a big black sea,
But not once has she let my life slip away from me.

She sat by my bed and stroked my hair,
Told me it was alright, she'd never leave,
She'd always be there.

There were times she cried,
Admitted she was wrong,
I keep saying to her,
It's alright you tried,
You were so strong.

We're all allowed to cry,
In our own little ways,
To be sad or angry or happy some days.

If I start to sink down into that sea,
I know for sure she'll be there for me,
And that I am thankful for,
In so many ways,
You saved me beautiful girl,
You were the one being brave. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 43 [informant] => 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Brave.

Contributed by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Sometimes it seems so surreal,
Sometimes I cannot beleive just how much I feel,
I started to drown into a big black sea,
But not once has she let my life slip away from me.

She sat by my bed and stroked my hair,
Told me it was alright, she'd never leave,
She'd always be there.

There were times she cried,
Admitted she was wrong,
I keep saying to her,
It's alright you tried,
You were so strong.

We're all allowed to cry,
In our own little ways,
To be sad or angry or happy some days.

If I start to sink down into that sea,
I know for sure she'll be there for me,
And that I am thankful for,
In so many ways,
You saved me beautiful girl,
You were the one being brave.




Copyright © 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 ... [ 2003-05-01 18:35:00]
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Re: Brave. (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:33:21 PM AEST
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I like this poem just the way it is...
Shari


Re: Brave. (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:55:43 PM AEST
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THis is a very pretty poem the way it is....it sounds as if you have a true friend there.


Re: Brave. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 11:27:07 PM AEST
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when I read this poem It really touched me it made me feel like I was drowning drowning in a pool of emotions I was like wow this is so deep I am drowning I couldn't really express in english words how this touched me and affected my life it's such a great way to look at things the perspective is so unique it made me drown drown because it was so deep (thats a double meaning)

AMY HOPPER


Re: Brave. (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 05:18:07 AM AEST
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powerful words sounds like a strong bond




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