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[sid] => 16847
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Brave.
[time] => 2003-05-01 18:35:00
[hometext] => This poem isnt really that good, it's about two people one I have already written about and posted poems on here about, and someone I have not. They are both amazing people in their own ways. If you could post your comments or suggestions on this or any of my poems I'd really appreciate it, I'd love to be able to have more skills to write with.
[bodytext] => Sometimes it seems so surreal,
Sometimes I cannot beleive just how much I feel, I started to drown into a big black sea, But not once has she let my life slip away from me. She sat by my bed and stroked my hair, Told me it was alright, she'd never leave, She'd always be there. There were times she cried, Admitted she was wrong, I keep saying to her, It's alright you tried, You were so strong. We're all allowed to cry, In our own little ways, To be sad or angry or happy some days. If I start to sink down into that sea, I know for sure she'll be there for me, And that I am thankful for, In so many ways, You saved me beautiful girl, You were the one being brave. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 43 [informant] => 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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