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Colors that fade
Before eyes that are screaming
To all black and white
In the night when I’m dreaming

Visions that span
Before thoughts
That ensure
The reasons I’ve given
That hope will endure

In words that I write
that sometime are rhyming
Laid out in style
That goes with my timing

Bits here of wisdom
That seldom I find
Truths that unfold
From deep in my mind

Of days that pass slowly
As years come and go
And for all that it’s cost
That I’ve nothing to show

But the tears that I’ve cried
And the worries I’ve felt
And all of the problems
With which that I’ve dealt

And the laughter I seen
in my daughters’ eyes
When all of the world
Is one big surprise

And tis here that I find
Where I’ve sadly spent
My time upon worries
That my mind has lent

Instead of the joys
In life that there are
In each of our lives
There shines like a star

A purpose we seek
Each to his own
In hopes that we find
Our own way home.

wordsy.

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Caught up in thought

Contributed by wordsy on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Colors that fade
Before eyes that are screaming
To all black and white
In the night when I’m dreaming

Visions that span
Before thoughts
That ensure
The reasons I’ve given
That hope will endure

In words that I write
that sometime are rhyming
Laid out in style
That goes with my timing

Bits here of wisdom
That seldom I find
Truths that unfold
From deep in my mind

Of days that pass slowly
As years come and go
And for all that it’s cost
That I’ve nothing to show

But the tears that I’ve cried
And the worries I’ve felt
And all of the problems
With which that I’ve dealt

And the laughter I seen
in my daughters’ eyes
When all of the world
Is one big surprise

And tis here that I find
Where I’ve sadly spent
My time upon worries
That my mind has lent

Instead of the joys
In life that there are
In each of our lives
There shines like a star

A purpose we seek
Each to his own
In hopes that we find
Our own way home.

wordsy.

Copyright Â© wordsy ... [ 2003-05-01 17:35:00]
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Re: Caught up in thought (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 05:41:30 PM AEST
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beautifully written, and i love the message:) your poetry is always so well laid out, great work and style:) hugs nessa

Re: Caught up in thought (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:05:15 PM AEST
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you said "bits here of wisdom, that i seldom find,, read what you have written,, the wisdom is already there,,a friend in words,,spooky

Re: Caught up in thought (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 11:56:52 PM AEST
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A beautiful message here well done! You can ramble anytime! Christina

Re: Caught up in thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:04:56 AM AEST
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I agree with Spooky. I think you have more wisdom than you give yourself credit for. Another great poem. How do you do it?

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