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Array ( [sid] => 16825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Big Brother [time] => 2003-05-01 08:35:00 [hometext] => My Brother Terry Is twenty-eight.
He's about to get married June seventh. [bodytext] => People come and go. Why couldn't you stay? I know you'll Always be my big brother. I looked up too you. I seem too Followd your foot steps in school. I learn from you where
You looked out for me. You were my night light when I Thought there was monsters under my bed. You were my big Brother. When guys come around you watched your little Sister. Why did you go? I go in your room I hear your voices Calling my name. Your not there. Where are you? I can't find You. I know you're in a new place of your own. Your happy Soon to be wife soon too be kids. I should be happy in away I am not cause I miss you around now it's only the four of us.
It seems like everyone is hurting inside not showing it you Know how we are. You know you were my shadow too Watch Over me. You were my night light when I was scared. You Were a friend when I lost one. You were my tears when I was Sad. Most of all I love you for you No One Ever Take Your Place. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 23 [informant] => trisha [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
Big Brother

Contributed by trisha on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



People come and go. Why couldn't you stay? I know you'll Always be my big brother. I looked up too you. I seem too Followd your foot steps in school. I learn from you where
You looked out for me. You were my night light when I Thought there was monsters under my bed. You were my big Brother. When guys come around you watched your little Sister. Why did you go? I go in your room I hear your voices Calling my name. Your not there. Where are you? I can't find You. I know you're in a new place of your own. Your happy Soon to be wife soon too be kids. I should be happy in away I am not cause I miss you around now it's only the four of us.
It seems like everyone is hurting inside not showing it you Know how we are. You know you were my shadow too Watch Over me. You were my night light when I was scared. You Were a friend when I lost one. You were my tears when I was Sad. Most of all I love you for you No One Ever Take Your Place.




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Re: Big Brother (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:05:12 PM AEST
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Very good. This clearly expresses how you are feeling. I do not personally know how you feel because I do not have a big brother. I do not have any brothers or sisters I am an only child. Some times I still wish that I did have a bid brother to look out for me, or even a little sister that I can look out for. I really enjoyed this.

ShadowsCloud


Re: Big Brother (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 07:51:48 PM AEST
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cool beans

Lindsey




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