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Array ( [sid] => 16814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => let go [time] => 2003-05-01 04:05:00 [hometext] => sometimes, love turns into a posession...you hold on so tightly that you end up crushing it in your fingers...or crushing yourself...to keep it. [bodytext] => I have it.
Can you see?
It is beautiful
and it is MINE!
I love it
I need it
I can't exist without it
So STAY AWAY
because it's MINE
and only MINE!

c'mon now!
you could live
without this
trust me
how did you exist
before it?
but don't worry
it will never leave you.

I am so afraid!
What if it slips away?
I must hold on
With all my strength, I MUST HOLD ON!
I can feel it slipping
through my fingers
I am strong.
I know I can hold on.

but you feel it slipping
don't you?
you can't hold on forever
let go
It is almost gone, now
kiss it, hold it tightly
for it will soon be gone
let your tears
cement this day in your mind
forever
hold on
but not to it
you are strong
so strong that you don't need this
show your true strength:

let go [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Czarina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

let go

Contributed by Czarina on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I have it.
Can you see?
It is beautiful
and it is MINE!
I love it
I need it
I can't exist without it
So STAY AWAY
because it's MINE
and only MINE!

c'mon now!
you could live
without this
trust me
how did you exist
before it?
but don't worry
it will never leave you.

I am so afraid!
What if it slips away?
I must hold on
With all my strength, I MUST HOLD ON!
I can feel it slipping
through my fingers
I am strong.
I know I can hold on.

but you feel it slipping
don't you?
you can't hold on forever
let go
It is almost gone, now
kiss it, hold it tightly
for it will soon be gone
let your tears
cement this day in your mind
forever
hold on
but not to it
you are strong
so strong that you don't need this
show your true strength:

let go

Copyright © Czarina ... [ 2003-05-01 04:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:17:20 AM AEST
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strong, good write
Shari

Re: let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:18:11 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, I know My girlfriend had to deal with this with her X, but instead of him letting go, she made him let go.
anyways it's a great write

Re: let go (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:40:07 PM AEST
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true:) hugs nessa

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