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Everyone said I wasn't good enough, they were right.
Nothing left but the pain inside.
So much pain it numbs me, numbs me to the point of falling on my knees and crying out in agony.
But these cheeks are dry.
Dry because I cried the tears away.
Dry because I cried until I could cry no longer.
Just sit and stare at the wall until I die.
I'm already dead inside anyway.
I was never good enough, no matter how hard I tried and said I could I couldn't.
These broken promises will do me no good, they just drag me down to depths I never knew existed.
It's too late for me.
The hand that pulled the trigger is cold, and I feel pain no more.
Goodbye. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Banda5k1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Goodbye.

Contributed by Banda5k1 on Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 05:07:19 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I tried my best but I failed, I will always be a failure.
Everyone said I wasn't good enough, they were right.
Nothing left but the pain inside.
So much pain it numbs me, numbs me to the point of falling on my knees and crying out in agony.
But these cheeks are dry.
Dry because I cried the tears away.
Dry because I cried until I could cry no longer.
Just sit and stare at the wall until I die.
I'm already dead inside anyway.
I was never good enough, no matter how hard I tried and said I could I couldn't.
These broken promises will do me no good, they just drag me down to depths I never knew existed.
It's too late for me.
The hand that pulled the trigger is cold, and I feel pain no more.
Goodbye.




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Re: Goodbye. (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 11:02:59 AM AEST
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I WONT LIE TO YOU AND TELL YOU I KNOW WHAT YOUR GOING THROUGH, BUT I KNOW SOME ONE THAT DOSE! MY WIFE! AND IF I LOOK AT HOW SHE FEELS THEN ALL I CAN DO IS PRAY FOR YOO.
GOD BLESS

GREETINGS
RUSSELL REINHARDT


Re: Goodbye. (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 12:27:04 PM AEST
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Just sumthing that might help you find your way. This is for you, me and the entire world,

You may not be perfect.
But Jesus thinks your to die for.

Lift your hands on high and cry out to your Father he wont foresake you trust me i know. God bless

Greetings
Russell Reinhardt


Re: Goodbye. (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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We truly never know what tomorrow will bring but with it comes the promise of a new day... Crying until you can't cry anymore has its place for sure, but writing until your hand cramps up is much more healing :) I do not take the subject of suicide lightly, not one bit in fact. I encourage you to reach out to friends and family, strangers even. Whomever will listen and can help you through this dark time. Hang in there friend, this too shall pass, I promise you that.


~Scorp


Re: Goodbye. (User Rating: 1 )
by Banda5k1 on Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 12:50:12 PM AEST
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You two need to chill out, I'm not suicidal, not even depressed. I just like writing poetry about death and other dark things.




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