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beauty

Contributed by T4love on Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 04:00:39 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



What defines beauty? Is it maybe a view that's breath taking or maybe a human being that is hard to resist? Some say it comes from within,the core of the person the center of the heart and I agree... Beauty is in all of us,its not men made nor planned or structured,beauty is who we are as human in gods eyes... God is above proud to always guide his precious creation and I believe he cries when we fall to side of evil sins we commit... No men,even the media can not state who's beautiful enough to be noticed by the world,because I every morning when I walk out the door all I see is beauty facing me... Before we judge think about what really defines the word beauty!




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Re: beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Banda5k1 on Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 05:26:35 PM AEST
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This poem didn't make a lot of sense to me, it seems you're trying to show an image of beauty or try to define it when you do neither of the two. I think it is a start but first you should use more imagery, make us know what beauty in your eyes is by the end of the poem. Also, make some grammar and spelling changes like it should be *man not men, etc.


Re: beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by xanvier on Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 03:46:36 AM AEST
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i guess your right about beauty but this is a just definition of beauty from the brain not from the heart, you should take more from your heart and take less from your brain, that is poetry is all about, it's about the heart that speaks to the soul, it's not the brain that speaks to the heart...
nice and beautiful poetry...




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