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I Am, I'll Be, I See
Contributed by
Fmdodge
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Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 01:51:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am, I still do not know,
I'll just sit and wait and continue to grow.
I'll just follow the road, without taking a turn
and if I take a wrong one, it will be a lesson learned.
I'll be, the best that I can be.
The one who defeats challenges, that will be me.
The one who won't commit any sin,
and in the end I'll be the one to win.
I see, problems surrounding this world,
How hard it is to grow up from being a little girl.
Media, advertisements portraying its not ok,
Just be yourself it's the only way.
But what I see, wont change who I am or who I'll be,
I'll just keep my head up and just be me.
Copyright ©
Fmdodge
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2011-10-23 13:51:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Am, I'll Be, I See
(User Rating: 1 ) by Banda5k1 on
Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 05:30:55 PM AEST (User
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I had the feeling you were trying to force your rhymes with this poem. I suggest trying to write a poem or two with little to no rhyming at all, just writing how you feel. Maybe then when you write another poem you'll be able to use that experience of just writing how you feel to use rhymes more naturally. Keep it up! |
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