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Array ( [sid] => 167989 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To feel, from steel. [time] => 2011-10-21 15:15:32 [hometext] => I wrote this earlier today, just thinking about that one special girl, this is what i came out with, i don't mind if you use this for whatever purpose, just remember, have fun. ( Dedicated to Georgina <3 ) [bodytext] => You asked me what i truly meant,
When i said i loved you,
In that small , cramped and cold tent,
What i truly mean is i care for you, more then all the others could do,

When i look upon her eyes, i feel my heart burning,
I thought I'd go insane,
Thanks to love yearning,
Those flickers of love and sanity remain,

To me, your a gorgeous flower in bloom,
Ive felt like this for quite a while,
Breaking through my gloom,
I love you for your eyes, your voice, your smile.

Your love i yearn to find,
Ive never felt like this,
Even in the depths of my mind,
I think of your kiss,

Why does the sight of you fill me with such pleasure,
You turned me from the steel.
Like a spotlight that shines on a glorious treasure?
Into the love, that i now feel. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => KhorniteHound [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

To feel, from steel.

Contributed by KhorniteHound on Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 03:15:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You asked me what i truly meant,
When i said i loved you,
In that small , cramped and cold tent,
What i truly mean is i care for you, more then all the others could do,

When i look upon her eyes, i feel my heart burning,
I thought I'd go insane,
Thanks to love yearning,
Those flickers of love and sanity remain,

To me, your a gorgeous flower in bloom,
Ive felt like this for quite a while,
Breaking through my gloom,
I love you for your eyes, your voice, your smile.

Your love i yearn to find,
Ive never felt like this,
Even in the depths of my mind,
I think of your kiss,

Why does the sight of you fill me with such pleasure,
You turned me from the steel.
Like a spotlight that shines on a glorious treasure?
Into the love, that i now feel.

Copyright © KhorniteHound ... [ 2011-10-21 15:15:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: To feel, from steel. (User Rating: 1 )
by JonnyCapone on Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 04:20:03 PM AEST
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Be wary. it matters not how how she is now, she will turn and you will fall. be wary.

Re: To feel, from steel. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 05:16:16 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really sweet write.
Blessings,
emy

Re: To feel, from steel. (User Rating: 1 )
by AmberAmethyst on Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 06:00:13 PM AEST
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awww i love it. and ima girl and there are some that will turn on you but it depends on a girls needs and how u meet those needs. alot of girls are really nice people. but u might have 'the 1' for you.

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