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Dawn
Contributed by
cathartic
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Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:34:34 PM in AEST
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Tinted mind
Stained glass heart
Still your beauty shined through
As your light consumed the gloom
I thought you would continue to illuminate
I thought this darkness would dissipate
I thought I could hide behind your radiance
use your rays as a shield from the shadows
Eclipse
Your afterglow now a fading memory
I reminisce, come back
Set my soul ablaze in the luminescence of your glorious light
Shine bright
In the black of my vessel
You will never leave
Through a mirror
Reflection of me, I see you
Tinted mind
Stained glass heart
Your beauty shines
In me
Copyright ©
cathartic
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2011-10-20 16:34:34]
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Re: Dawn
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:55:11 PM AEST
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How unique and clever and
beautifully written. Enjoyable!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns |
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Re: Dawn
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by Anoo on
Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 09:30:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful verses. I can read and reread
with my own imgination attached to your poem.
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Re: Dawn
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by sebgreen on
Thursday, 10th May 2012 @ 11:54:51 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, it's a shame that you have to tell us, though nobody would read it in reverse otherwise ... Very clever ! |
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