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Array ( [sid] => 167948 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy, Please Daddy... [time] => 2011-10-19 21:27:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Daddy, don't lie to me, I wanna know
Where is she hiding, and why did she go?
Daddy, don't lie to me, please, pretty please
It's like I can hear her voice within the breeze.
Daddy, don't lie to me, where did she run?
Daddy, I know all the things you have done.

Daddy, don't lie to me, I've seen her scars
Hidden from me like the faraway stars.

Daddy, don't tell me, I don't wanna hear
I'm hoping these thoughts are just worries, just fears.
Daddy, don't tell me, I can't stand the facts
I just wanna think this is some silly act.

Daddy, I love you, you know this is true
But honestly, why do you do what you do?

Daddy, I saw you when you pushed her down
She screamed and she cried, and you made not a sound.
Daddy, I saw you when you stabbed her back
She fell to the floor and again, you attacked.
Daddy, I saw when you stole her goodbyes
And Daddy, I saw when you silenced her cries.

Daddy, don't lie to me, I know the truth...
You hurt her, you killed her, you've darkened my youth.

Daddy, don't hurt me, I won't tell a soul
I've learned all my lessons, I've learned self control.
Daddy, don't hurt me, it won't make you glad
You'd lose all you want and you'd lose all you have.
Daddy, don't hurt me, I swear I'll obey
Just please, never hurt me, and we'll be okay.

Daddy, don't hurt me, please put down that gun...
I really am sorry for being someone.
Daddy, don't hurt me, they'll catch you, you know.
Daddy, please Daddy, please don't let me go.
Daddy, don't hurt me, don't do this again...
I love you so much Daddy, please Daddy...


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Daddy, Please Daddy...

Contributed by Mikki on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 09:27:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Daddy, don't lie to me, I wanna know
Where is she hiding, and why did she go?
Daddy, don't lie to me, please, pretty please
It's like I can hear her voice within the breeze.
Daddy, don't lie to me, where did she run?
Daddy, I know all the things you have done.

Daddy, don't lie to me, I've seen her scars
Hidden from me like the faraway stars.

Daddy, don't tell me, I don't wanna hear
I'm hoping these thoughts are just worries, just fears.
Daddy, don't tell me, I can't stand the facts
I just wanna think this is some silly act.

Daddy, I love you, you know this is true
But honestly, why do you do what you do?

Daddy, I saw you when you pushed her down
She screamed and she cried, and you made not a sound.
Daddy, I saw you when you stabbed her back
She fell to the floor and again, you attacked.
Daddy, I saw when you stole her goodbyes
And Daddy, I saw when you silenced her cries.

Daddy, don't lie to me, I know the truth...
You hurt her, you killed her, you've darkened my youth.

Daddy, don't hurt me, I won't tell a soul
I've learned all my lessons, I've learned self control.
Daddy, don't hurt me, it won't make you glad
You'd lose all you want and you'd lose all you have.
Daddy, don't hurt me, I swear I'll obey
Just please, never hurt me, and we'll be okay.

Daddy, don't hurt me, please put down that gun...
I really am sorry for being someone.
Daddy, don't hurt me, they'll catch you, you know.
Daddy, please Daddy, please don't let me go.
Daddy, don't hurt me, don't do this again...
I love you so much Daddy, please Daddy...


Bam.




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Re: Daddy, Please Daddy... (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:40:58 AM AEST
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I seriously hope this is not something that happened to you or someone you know. If it is ... I feel deeply sorry for you. If not... well... its still very sad.


Re: Daddy, Please Daddy... (User Rating: 1 )
by RavenOktober on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 05:10:35 AM AEST
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this is amazing! i really hope it's not based on actual events, but great job.


Re: Daddy, Please Daddy... (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 05:27:16 PM AEST
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Whoa! Leaves me speechless,
And Perplexed at the same time.
A talented write but leaves me
wondering who the character
portrayed might me or if it's
fact or fiction!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns


Re: Daddy, Please Daddy... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 06:47:07 PM AEST
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That's great writing even tho it's very sad. I'd say it's fiction 'cause you're still alive. Either way,
blessings,
emy




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