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cupid
Contributed by
cathartic
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 07:39:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I drove a long time to watch you die without sound
Love ate you out
She put your heart on a hot plate and you watched from a distance as she devoured it whole
She left you
Sitting on the couch
Converter still in hand
Tongue running after her but it forgot to take the words
I’ll take a picture of this moment
A visual representation of this mental state is now documented proof
That love is a *****
I’ll be your cerebral maverick
I’ll be your not so subtle reminder that Shakespeare
only spoke of love
Copyright ©
cathartic
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2011-10-19 19:39:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: cupid
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:18:13 AM AEST (User
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not exactly what I expected from the title, :p but very deep. Well done. I especially liked the metaphors. haha |
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Re: cupid
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 05:55:27 AM AEST (User
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Hi again:)
& Welcome to YPDC. . . I see you're new to the site & I was once, too. I've found this a nice place to be. :)
I really like this poem of yours as well. Yes love is illusive at times. . . sneaks up on you. Generally if you're
talking about it your not doing it & vis-versa. . . whatever "it" is (including love).
peace elle |
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Re: cupid
(User Rating: 1 ) by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 07:28:48 AM AEST (User
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it is unique i give you that one. i felt like the poem and the title worked in a way that just has its own voice/language that no one else knows or speaks. quite interesting. keep writing |
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