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Array ( [sid] => 167903 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please [time] => 2011-10-17 22:29:37 [hometext] => In this poem I talk about different levels of society in our current world and how it affects us. it is a emotional poem with a sad tone. please leave comments and ratings. [bodytext] => Smile, Smile and fake
Your emotions. Through
Your fake emotions
I see a white calm steed.

Please

Affluence with ease
Please

Aristocracy, Beau Monde.

Please

In the Final corner, Black
Bright blue, effulgence

Benevolence in society
Solitude. Behind the
Final corner, placid

Haute Monde
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Please

Contributed by Laeth on Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 10:29:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Smile, Smile and fake
Your emotions. Through
Your fake emotions
I see a white calm steed.

Please

Affluence with ease
Please

Aristocracy, Beau Monde.

Please

In the Final corner, Black
Bright blue, effulgence

Benevolence in society
Solitude. Behind the
Final corner, placid

Haute Monde

Copyright © Laeth ... [ 2011-10-17 22:29:37]
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Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 06:55:02 AM AEST
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some words are beyond my vocab explain ?

Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Laeth on Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 09:54:08 PM AEST
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Beau monde - the fashionable world; high society.
Haute monde - high society.
Aristocracy - a class of persons holding exceptional rank and privileges, especially the hereditary nobility.

Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Laeth on Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 09:55:09 PM AEST
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any critics? any opinions, comments?

please let me know

thanks alot

Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 06:58:48 PM AEST
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it's a very true poem. you wrote it perfectly - especially with those words. i liked it. it's different.

Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by cathartic on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 09:11:29 PM AEST
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its original. for that i will give you 2 on a scale of 1-5. just because it original, does not mean it passes as an exceptional piece of work. A for effort (:

Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Laeth on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 11:58:26 PM AEST
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was that 2 out of 5 as 5 being the worst a 1 being the best?

i need more comments and opinions please,

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