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Array ( [sid] => 167873 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Away [time] => 2011-10-16 00:06:03 [hometext] => Hey what can I say, youáll know I'm mad, now you know for sure :) [bodytext] => I'm not saying much, but what I will say,

Is yet once again, we are on our way,

Ten thousand miles we will travel, within a day

And once again without any money, but hey....

If you don't take the risk, and see come what may

At home you will stay, you will never stray

So many months will see us way, way away


Until we have worked, scrimped and saved

And got up enough to fly back over the waves

To return home for even a few days

But home is where your heart is they say

So my home is anywhere together we stay.


As a footnote, I will be away a lil while but checking each day in here to make sure things are running as bumpy as they always are :)

Take care all, see you soon, and see some soonerah than others :) (as he smiles across the miles and he jumps a plane for whoknowswhere) [comments] => 5 [counter] => 324 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Mick_Puttock [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Away

Contributed by Mick_Puttock on Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 12:06:03 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I'm not saying much, but what I will say,

Is yet once again, we are on our way,

Ten thousand miles we will travel, within a day

And once again without any money, but hey....

If you don't take the risk, and see come what may

At home you will stay, you will never stray

So many months will see us way, way away


Until we have worked, scrimped and saved

And got up enough to fly back over the waves

To return home for even a few days

But home is where your heart is they say

So my home is anywhere together we stay.


As a footnote, I will be away a lil while but checking each day in here to make sure things are running as bumpy as they always are :)

Take care all, see you soon, and see some soonerah than others :) (as he smiles across the miles and he jumps a plane for whoknowswhere)




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Re: Away (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 06:13:20 AM AEST
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Wow, can't believe I'm the first to comment.
good work friend.
Ya'll enjoy your selves in the midst of it all.
Luv ya'll,
emy


Re: Away (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 10:01:44 AM AEST
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'Away' is a smooth and well-written poem, but I must confess a certain fear that when 'father' is gone, the kids will misbehave :) Well, thank you for all your kind words and your tireless and excellent work. How fitting to say Goodbye in a poem! Of course I know you have to go AWAY -- and wish you both well -- that is, as long as you promise to come back! Nah -- even if you stay AWAY, stay in peace. Shalom for now--

--FlintHunter


Re: Away (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 10:00:39 AM AEST
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Oddly mad or maddly odd, you always capture me with the story of a good read. Nice!


ming


Re: Away (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 08:18:39 AM AEST
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when love is real ,money as no appeal .The risk is better because you are being real with your feeling. In this poem.enjoy you vacation.


Re: Away (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 08:24:15 AM AEST
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when love is real ,money as no appeal .The risk is better because you are being real with your feeling. In this poem.enjoy you vacation.




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