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Array ( [sid] => 167844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Visions [time] => 2011-10-14 16:54:02 [hometext] => This poem is about the fantastic powers of the Human Imagination and how they satisfy the Soul. [bodytext] => The sun is shining on a morning new

And I start thinking of what to do...

Shall I go for a walk on a sandy beach?

And invigorate my soul with the scenic view...



Shall I take a stroll through majestic vales?

Or cast an eye at pearly skies...

Watching the birds dance and play

In all their easy-going ways....



Shall I take a stroll through forests green

Hearing the emerald symphony

Of whistling wind through the singing leaves

While I rest with hands crossed above my knees



Shall I ascend the mountains tallest of tall

And watch the world bathed in clouds

See the horizon majestic and fair

And wonder what is happening there.



And in such thoughts the day is passed

The time to do is gone at last

But the visions of splendor still remain

Of the beauty there is outside and within




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Visions

Contributed by Waqasrab on Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 04:54:02 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



The sun is shining on a morning new

And I start thinking of what to do...

Shall I go for a walk on a sandy beach?

And invigorate my soul with the scenic view...



Shall I take a stroll through majestic vales?

Or cast an eye at pearly skies...

Watching the birds dance and play

In all their easy-going ways....



Shall I take a stroll through forests green

Hearing the emerald symphony

Of whistling wind through the singing leaves

While I rest with hands crossed above my knees



Shall I ascend the mountains tallest of tall

And watch the world bathed in clouds

See the horizon majestic and fair

And wonder what is happening there.



And in such thoughts the day is passed

The time to do is gone at last

But the visions of splendor still remain

Of the beauty there is outside and within




To Read More of My Poetry CLICK HERE Find me on Facebook !! or visit my YouTube Channel or Email




Copyright © Waqasrab ... [ 2011-10-14 16:54:02]
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Re: Visions (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 05:45:00 PM AEST
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Such beautiful mind pictures that invade
my thoughts and allow me to see clearly
those very places you describe!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns
(Rob)


Re: Visions (User Rating: 1 )
by xanvier on Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 11:13:53 PM AEST
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i like the way it catches my imagination of thinking
but there's no rhyming scheme, and it does not have syllable pattern and words are redundant, it keeps the word or words on repeat, you need to improve on syllable pattern and rhyming to make a good poetry and make the words not redundant... nice and beautiful poetry...


Re: Visions (User Rating: 1 )
by xanvier on Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 11:20:03 PM AEST
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you need to make it flow the words in order for the reader to get a possible and more powerful imagination...




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