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Array ( [sid] => 16775 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => In The End [time] => 2003-04-30 15:05:00 [hometext] => ...No Comment's, you decide. [bodytext] => The bitterness of hell
has bitten into my heart
and left a gaping hole
throughout this evil time.
I am left without control
what have I become?
In this hateful world
I’m just your shadow.

What sweetness is left
in this bitter fruit
everyone I know
fades away in the end.
I’ll leave your world behind.
If it’s the wish of your heart
because everyone I know
Fades away in the end.

“Hurt” isn’t close to the word
That I feel inside
I love you dearly
and I was torn away.
Lost within a crimson tear
that has long been shed
I float away
from your heart in the end

What sweetness is left
in this bitter fruit
everyone I know
fades away in the end.
I’ll leave your world behind.
If it’s the wish of your heart
because everyone I know
Fades away in the end. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 34 [informant] => metalmouth666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

In The End

Contributed by metalmouth666 on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

The bitterness of hell
has bitten into my heart
and left a gaping hole
throughout this evil time.
I am left without control
what have I become?
In this hateful world
I’m just your shadow.

What sweetness is left
in this bitter fruit
everyone I know
fades away in the end.
I’ll leave your world behind.
If it’s the wish of your heart
because everyone I know
Fades away in the end.

“Hurt” isn’t close to the word
That I feel inside
I love you dearly
and I was torn away.
Lost within a crimson tear
that has long been shed
I float away
from your heart in the end

What sweetness is left
in this bitter fruit
everyone I know
fades away in the end.
I’ll leave your world behind.
If it’s the wish of your heart
because everyone I know
Fades away in the end.

Copyright Â© metalmouth666 ... [ 2003-04-30 15:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 04:48:11 PM AEST
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such a heart-rending poem.
i love the repetition of 'fades away in the end'.
x_x_x

Re: In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:08:10 PM AEST
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very good, it will be an awesome song... :O)

Lindsey

Re: In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 03:12:50 AM AEST
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I can really relate to this and just curious how you gonna do the lyrics melodic, heavy, or soft it can be any or a mix of all.

exiled

Re: In The End (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 12:46:48 PM AEST
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hay Exiled...The way the melodic is, is a mix of both soft and hard...hank you for asking, and thanks for your comment
~MetalMouth666

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