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thus, it would bring a bright new day
shining through the window sill
as it glared on transparent glass
Mourning has awaken
but still lies in bed
Eyes opened at the crack of dawn
dreams had erupted
crystal shattered in the willows of mist
as soon as it gets up
into the alarming sounds of the crickets
where? there is no one to be found
The sunshine stands in front of the reflection
at Cinderella's mirror
could only see the beautiful

As the day go by
the phase of reality would change
until the dusk comes
The shadows walks into stage of spotlight
until it goes farther and further
and it illuminates from different acts
The darkness could only see
the brightness of the moon
and lights the whole paradise of the sky
as it guides the Eve through the night
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Eve

Contributed by xanvier on Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 09:37:14 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The Sun has come up
thus, it would bring a bright new day
shining through the window sill
as it glared on transparent glass
Mourning has awaken
but still lies in bed
Eyes opened at the crack of dawn
dreams had erupted
crystal shattered in the willows of mist
as soon as it gets up
into the alarming sounds of the crickets
where? there is no one to be found
The sunshine stands in front of the reflection
at Cinderella's mirror
could only see the beautiful

As the day go by
the phase of reality would change
until the dusk comes
The shadows walks into stage of spotlight
until it goes farther and further
and it illuminates from different acts
The darkness could only see
the brightness of the moon
and lights the whole paradise of the sky
as it guides the Eve through the night

Copyright © xanvier ... [ 2011-10-10 09:37:14]
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Re: Eve (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 11:44:44 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
Blessings,
emy

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