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Battered body weary with being
Bleeding ears sick of the screams
Tortured mind, nothing’s what it seems

Searching hands, black with ashes
Nothing left, I grab the matches
Destroy everything to see the light
Pretend it’s normal, but nothing’s right

Convince myself destruction’s the key,
A beginning in ending all I see
Watch as the dust flies away
I’m left alone, it’s best that way

Nothing to ruin, nothing to lose
No need to read their cryptic clues
Sick of a constant struggle to do right
I give up on this impossible fight

Watch the paint blister, blacken, peel
A shimmering fantasy, nothing’s real
Ever changing, never the same
I’ve found a home, in the flames [comments] => 2 [counter] => 110 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ravenoktober [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Heavenly Hades

Contributed by ravenoktober on Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 05:06:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Jaded eyes grown tired of seeing
Battered body weary with being
Bleeding ears sick of the screams
Tortured mind, nothing’s what it seems

Searching hands, black with ashes
Nothing left, I grab the matches
Destroy everything to see the light
Pretend it’s normal, but nothing’s right

Convince myself destruction’s the key,
A beginning in ending all I see
Watch as the dust flies away
I’m left alone, it’s best that way

Nothing to ruin, nothing to lose
No need to read their cryptic clues
Sick of a constant struggle to do right
I give up on this impossible fight

Watch the paint blister, blacken, peel
A shimmering fantasy, nothing’s real
Ever changing, never the same
I’ve found a home, in the flames

Copyright Â© ravenoktober ... [ 2011-10-10 05:06:18]
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Re: Heavenly Hades (User Rating: 1 )
by xanvier on Wednesday, 12th October 2011 @ 10:34:02 AM AEST
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i like your poetry the way they rhyme scheme but they are not
syllable pattern... nice and beautiful poetry...

Re: Heavenly Hades (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 12:58:49 AM AEST
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perfectly done! i agree with it. this poem is so true! i live it! you have talent.

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